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Your feet receive a beating when we go walking or run. As much as 3 X our fat is pushed downward upon our heels with each and every pace.Think about the quantity of methods we take in a life-time and it really is it is no wonder your feet can feel sore or ache. Because we become further along in years, the fatty tissues on our heels as well as forefeet usually lower and with that, our natural shock absorption drops. Energetic people, specifically people who frequently engage in sporting activities that need running and leaping are very prone to Bruised Heels as a result of the continuous thumping inside the heel area. In the event that their own boots or shoes are damaged or of sub standard quality so that it will offer small heel impact moderation, the risk is increased. A bruised heel could not merely be very uncomfortable but it may also take a lengthy time to heal if the problem isn't effectively handled and the causing activity is not substantially reduced. Rest, ice packs and more than the counter treatments such as ibuprofen will aid to decrease discomfort however until the harmful exercise is ceased, the ailment will become worse without the need of <a href=http://sfz.schattenkind.net/wiki/index.php/Ways_To_End_Plantar_Fasciitis>Heel Cups for men </a>. 
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Discomfort within the base with the heel in the first step in the morning is a common sign of plantar fasciitis. The plantar fascia can be a ring of connective tissue that aids the arch. It starts in the heel bone and stretches towards the toes. An excessive amount of anxiety around the plantar fascia final results in tearing and swelling as well as the occurrence of plantar fasciitis. The discomfort is usually localized at the floor, inside with the heel, but can certainly expand through the arch. The pain might be distinct, dull, achy, burning or really feel just like a "stone bruise". The discomfort is typically rather more serious when walking without footwear and following effort. Side to side sports, for example basketball and tennis, influence sports activities such as running and jogging and simple activities such as gardening will all magnify plantar fasciitis. Identifying the aspects which contribute to the progress of plantar fasciitis will be the important to therapy. There's almost always a adjust in activity, a adjust in shoes and boots, a adjust in job or walking surface which has preceded the progress of the state. A stressful event or turning injury seldom brings about the situation, but a simple action like walking by means of an airport in a poor top quality shoe can effortlessly trigger the condition in individuals vulnerable to improvement. All those with faulty foot movement, collapsing arches and over-pronation have got a higher chance of developing heel pain without <a href=http://reallusiondownload.com/index.php?title=Why_Heel_Cups_Handle_Heel_Spurs>Heel Cups for women </a> or <a href=http://fargoautomation.com/index.php/member/89014/>Heel Pads for women </a>.
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A bruised heel may be avoided by very first putting on excellent quality shoes or boots that provide some sort of shock reduction for your heel area.The shoe Insoles should ultimately have heel cupping as this sort of foot bed insole will surround the fatty heel pad to help take up shock and impact. Enhancing the shoes with excellent top quality Shoe Insoles will greatly assist to avoid heel bruising as well as provide alleviation in case the condition currently exists. Gel <a href=http://hichat.wall.fm/blogs/post/6>Gel Heel Cups </a> offer excellent cushioning and cushioning for your heel. The Insoles are designed with an encapsulating heel cup and also have deep heel cupping and offer excellent heel cushioning although also supplying arch support to help restore and maintain appropriate foot arch work, harmony, alignment and stability. If your foot doesn't have a great heel cup, the fat pad will splay outward which lowers the all-natural shock absorption of one's heel. Much less shock absorbing capabilities indicates a lot more tension in your heel bone which outcomes in bruised heels. You do not must endure the uncomfortable pain of a bruised heel. Avoidance and reduction can be a easy solution away.
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===Quickstarter===
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:should be very direct with new players, explaining every step involved in the basic tasks. focus on learning by experiment as complimentary to manual's Player guide which focuses on learning by book. [[User:Compromisery|Compromisery]]
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==FAQ==
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:Looks good!
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==Manual==
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:Needs more cleaning, and a read over. It's really hard to read to me --[[User:Fattierob|Fattierob]] 22:35, 10 October 2011 (BST)
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:Needs Protection editing
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::manual should be safe for free editing. if it becomes an issue, we'll just restrict access. [[User:Doran|Doran]]
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:::Yeah, I was expecting a lot more editing then what's going on --[[User:Fattierob|Fattierob]] 22:35, 10 October 2011 (BST)
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im wondering if bombing and infantry should be separated, as infantry are related in both planet capture and planet management. also, bombing should just be renamed as 'capturing planets' and expanded appropriately [[User:Compromisery|Compromisery]] 17:59, 12 October 2011 (BST)
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::i really feel that the manual should be separated into pages for each game-related chapter. it would be as good as hell for anyone who opens the finalized manual and has to load over a hundred gameplay images because they are part of the same page. the amputated manual page can have the chapter intro and links to each chapter. maybe also toss in gaming site reviews? [[User:Compromisery|Compromisery]] 13:47, 13 October 2011 (BST)
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===ROC===
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:Done
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===History Galactica===
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certain parts of the HG can really benefit from condensing, shortening of sentences and pictures. embedded images should be used to give a 'visual story' feel. need some artists for it though. [[User:Compromisery|Compromisery]] 12:48, 11 October 2011 (BST)
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===Darkspace Database===
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:Add this in? Add it in and break it up into different pages? --[[User:Fattierob|Fattierob]] 23:08, 5 October 2011 (BST)
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::should almost certainly be split, and it'll likely get covered in other pages [[User:Doran|Doran]]
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===Other Documents===
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:About page
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===Main Page===
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:links to manual, faq, roc, newplayer/quickstart guide of some sort
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:tidy up layout
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::can possibly leave this bit for the general public
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:::or better idea, one of the (to be determined) elevated user "wiki editor/moderators"
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:::I suggest "Chief of Wiki" --[[User:Fattierob|Fattierob]] 19:37, 6 October 2011 (BST)
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===Category Pages===
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i think that a number of pages ought to be simple category pages that just list subcontents. for example: "Ships" would just include [[Destroyer]],[[Cruiser]],[[Dreadnought]] et al. without making distinction for faction variants.
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the page for a hull class, ie [[Cruiser]] also would be a category page which lists all the variants for each faction. Each ship ([[Cruiser#ST-34_Torpedo_Cruiser]]) would then link to a specific page about the  
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craft, rather than a point farther down on the hull class's page, and that's where you'd have info on its armament, speed, turn rate, lore and all the various and sundry goodies that go with, like a [http://www.darkspace.net/images/dsdb/ships/M-400.jpg screenshot]
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:apply similar set up for gadgets (-> weapons/ship systems -> particle cannon), possibly also star systems, but i think each system can have its own page linked in from the [[MetaVerse]] page, and notable planets would then be linked in to their system's page. ''exception would be a "celestial bodies" group (include stars,nebulae...planets -> gas/terran/arid etc.)'' [[User:Doran|Doran]]
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I think the info on the ship should be on the Hull Page, because creating a page for every ship variant (especially with them being renamed all the time) seems tedious and a waste. I can understand either direction, however, and really don't care which way. Agree with everything else too --[[Special:Contributions/69.74.217.61|69.74.217.61]] 04:58, 7 October 2011 (BST)
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===Spelling, punctuation and grammar===
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I know some of you may not call English your primary language, and I know others might just want to get pages up first, then worry about readability later, but for the sake of consistency, make and effort to at least spell-check your contributions as you go. Use the "show preview" button if you need to. [[User:Doran|Doran]]
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*"you" not 'u'
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*their/there/there
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*"though" not 'tho'
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*try to avoid using slang/shorthand/abbreviations (like "inf") unless you've already given a definition for it.

Revision as of 16:08, 24 January 2012

TODO list:

Ships

Needs info

Quickstarter

should be very direct with new players, explaining every step involved in the basic tasks. focus on learning by experiment as complimentary to manual's Player guide which focuses on learning by book. Compromisery

FAQ

Looks good!

Manual

Needs more cleaning, and a read over. It's really hard to read to me --Fattierob 22:35, 10 October 2011 (BST)
Needs Protection editing
manual should be safe for free editing. if it becomes an issue, we'll just restrict access. Doran
Yeah, I was expecting a lot more editing then what's going on --Fattierob 22:35, 10 October 2011 (BST)

im wondering if bombing and infantry should be separated, as infantry are related in both planet capture and planet management. also, bombing should just be renamed as 'capturing planets' and expanded appropriately Compromisery 17:59, 12 October 2011 (BST)

i really feel that the manual should be separated into pages for each game-related chapter. it would be as good as hell for anyone who opens the finalized manual and has to load over a hundred gameplay images because they are part of the same page. the amputated manual page can have the chapter intro and links to each chapter. maybe also toss in gaming site reviews? Compromisery 13:47, 13 October 2011 (BST)

ROC

Done

History Galactica

Needs cleaning
Needs linking

certain parts of the HG can really benefit from condensing, shortening of sentences and pictures. embedded images should be used to give a 'visual story' feel. need some artists for it though. Compromisery 12:48, 11 October 2011 (BST)

Darkspace Database

Add this in? Add it in and break it up into different pages? --Fattierob 23:08, 5 October 2011 (BST)
should almost certainly be split, and it'll likely get covered in other pages Doran

Other Documents

About page

Main Page

links to manual, faq, roc, newplayer/quickstart guide of some sort
tidy up layout
can possibly leave this bit for the general public
or better idea, one of the (to be determined) elevated user "wiki editor/moderators"
I suggest "Chief of Wiki" --Fattierob 19:37, 6 October 2011 (BST)

Category Pages

i think that a number of pages ought to be simple category pages that just list subcontents. for example: "Ships" would just include Destroyer,Cruiser,Dreadnought et al. without making distinction for faction variants. the page for a hull class, ie Cruiser also would be a category page which lists all the variants for each faction. Each ship (Cruiser#ST-34_Torpedo_Cruiser) would then link to a specific page about the craft, rather than a point farther down on the hull class's page, and that's where you'd have info on its armament, speed, turn rate, lore and all the various and sundry goodies that go with, like a screenshot

apply similar set up for gadgets (-> weapons/ship systems -> particle cannon), possibly also star systems, but i think each system can have its own page linked in from the MetaVerse page, and notable planets would then be linked in to their system's page. exception would be a "celestial bodies" group (include stars,nebulae...planets -> gas/terran/arid etc.) Doran

I think the info on the ship should be on the Hull Page, because creating a page for every ship variant (especially with them being renamed all the time) seems tedious and a waste. I can understand either direction, however, and really don't care which way. Agree with everything else too --69.74.217.61 04:58, 7 October 2011 (BST)

Spelling, punctuation and grammar

I know some of you may not call English your primary language, and I know others might just want to get pages up first, then worry about readability later, but for the sake of consistency, make and effort to at least spell-check your contributions as you go. Use the "show preview" button if you need to. Doran

  • "you" not 'u'
  • their/there/there
  • "though" not 'tho'
  • try to avoid using slang/shorthand/abbreviations (like "inf") unless you've already given a definition for it.
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