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NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-01-06 20:19   
Done my friend..., i hope you like you little piece.

Same goes for everyone else, if'd like you to be added say so and i'll do my best to write you in, most will be for a short while but some might stay...

Depeneding on when you ask determeins when you'll be added but normal no more then two chapters from when you ask too when you'll read about your own chacater!

You'll glad too know that chapter 7 is almost done, it will be longer then previous chapters and will take a new format thats more in line with Novels etc which will hopefully make it easier to understand.

Also as per request after i think chapter 3 i've tryed toneing down dialog and added more 3rd person nartive.
[ This Message was edited by: NZ-juex16 on 2011-01-06 22:40 ]
[ This Message was edited by: NZ-juex16 on 2011-01-06 23:55 ]
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NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-01-07 04:22   
This chapter takes a new feel, there is more discribtion then before more characters added (don't worry you'll be there longer...;p) and a new adventure started for a completely feel then before, i hope you like.

NZ-Juex16


Chapter seven


Juex sleeped on Lightbreakers couch soundly and quietly but after around six or so hours he was regaining basic motor functions his heavy sleep had turned into a light one and he could now hear and feel things.

He couldn’t open his eyes, he was so tried it was like his body said “your sleeping whether you like it or not” after around another three hours he could feel this annoying pain coming from a point just above his left but check.

It grew ever more painful and annoying till he had enough and decided to get his drunken butt up but he was still weak in his legs and he decided just to roll off and hit the floor “grrr” he slowly got on his on two feet and search for the cause of the pain in his backside. He lifted his shirt and blazer to find the vodka bottle lid dug into his skin. He grabbed it and took it out to his relief it was the object causing his pain he looked at the mark left behind

“That isn’t going to go away quick” said Lightbreaker from behind his desk Juex jumped from the fright Lightbreaker gave him

“It is my office you know just because you passed out in it don’t mean I’m going somewhere else” Lightbreaker threw Juex the Folder that he had been given by the unknown man

“Go sober up and read it, come back when your done” Juex still taken in his surroundings followed the order without speaking.

He walked to his on base quarters and changed into a standard UGTO battle dress overalls and sat down at the desk and began reading.

UGTO MISSION BRIEFING
*****EYES ONLY*****

1ST ADMIRAL OF THE FLEET JUEX

MISSION IMPRAIRTIVE, UNDER UGTO NAVAL SERCURTIY, CLASSFIED KNOWAGLE SECTION TWO SUB TEXT TEN YOU ARE HELD TO YOUR COMMISON AND YOUR LIFE THAT THIS KNOWAGLE WILL NOT BE LEAKED UNDER ANY REASON SO HELP YOU GOD.

MISSION BRIEF START……….

ON THE 30TH OF JULY SST 2069 A ICC HEAVY CRUISER THE CSS VOIN AND IT’S ESCORT THE COMBAT DESTROYER CSS NEPOBEIMYI DEFEICTED TO THE UGTO FORCES IN THE R33 SYSTEAM.

THEY TOLD US THAT INSIDE THE ICC THEIR WERE SIGNS OF INTERNAL FIGHTING AND THAT THE WHOLE ICC MAY COLLAPISE IF THINGS CONTINUED THE WAY THEY WERE GOING. THE WAR WITH BOTH THE K’LUTH AND UGTO WAS DRAINING HEAVLY ON THE ICC TO THE BREAKING POINT OF CIVAL WAR AND THIS COULD RESULAT IN ROUGE PLANETS WITH HIGH LEVEL TECHNOGLY FALLING INTO THE WRONG HANDS.

EVEN SO OUR INTELL SORUCES STAT THAT EVEN WITH A WAR ON TWO FRONTS THE ICC SHOULD BE ABLE TO STILL FIGHT WITHOUT SERIOUS SHORTAGES.

A FEW MONTHS AGO A SMALL FLEET OF ICC COMBAT DESTROYERS AND FRIGATES WENT MISSING.

NATUALLY THEY BLAMED US….BUT WE DIDN’T DO IT, NEITHER THE K’LUTH. WE ALSO HAVE HAD SHIPS GO MISSING IN THE SYSTEAM IN QUESTION THAT THOSE ICC SHIPS WENT MISSING BUT THE ICC NOR THE K’LUTH ARE WILLING TO COMMENT ON THE SITUATION.

UNDER DIRECT ORDER OF THE UNINTED GLACTIC TRADE ORGANISTION SENATE YOU ARE TO TAKE COMMAND OF THE CSS VOIN AND ITS ESCORT.

YOU WILL THEN PROCCED TO THE NEAREST FRIENDLY ICC SHIPYARD AND ESTABLISH A COVER. YOU ARE THEN INSTUCTED TO GATHER INTELLAGINCE ON THE MATTER AND TAKE ACTION ON THE MATTER AS YOU SEE FIT.

IN ORDER TO KEEP YOUR COVER YOU ARE TO DO ANYTHING ORDERED OF YOU BY THE ICC NAVY INCULDING FIGHTING THE UGTO FORCES IF NESSARLY.

THE CSS VOID AND IT’S ESCORT WILL BE CREWED BY IT’S OWN CREW WITH YOU AS THE COMMANDER OF BOTH SHIPS, THE CAPTAIN OF THE VOID WILL INFORM YOU OF ALL STANDARD ICC NAVY PROCEDTURES AND TATICS.

THAT IS ALL.




Juex sat there for a minute as his mind it was still hung over from yesterday ‘why couldn’t they simply get naval intelligence to look into this?” he wondered “why me? Why now? Why send in a whole ship for this seemly ‘small’ issue” but it wasn’t him to decide.

He got up and then proceeded to the mess ‘an army marches on its stomach’ he thought after around ten minutes of aimless wondering he found the sergeants and warrant officers mess known simply as the officers mess. He walked in and jumped into the hot food line and after a few minutes it was his turn though the buffet food line he grabbed a plate and added two fried eggs, a couple of slices of bacon and three hash browns as he was leaving the line he quickly snatched two bits of toast and he then proceeded to a empty table.

He began eating. He first butchered the eggs with the toast and proceeded to do the same with the bacon when a woman in a ICC uniform slid into the table in front of him

“How may I help you” grubaled Juex though mouthfuls of food

“I knew you uggies were pigs but you don’t make it easy on yourself do you?” replied the woman

“I’m not here to look pretty you know” answered Juex “I’m guessing you’re the commander of the VOID?” ask Juex

“Yes I am sir I’m Captain Larna Furlough” “Admiral Juex” said Juex while putting out his hand for a hand shake. Furlough grabbed it weakly and shock it slowly as Juex’s hand was greasy and covered in salt, after she let go she wiped her hand on her leg to wipe away the grease.

So I refer back to my first question”

“I just came too meet our knew commandeering officer sir and introduce myself”

“Oh I see well it’s been a pleasure, now if you don’t mind I have some things to attend to so I will meet you on your ship” Juex got up and began walking towards the hallway.

The mess was full of people eating the breakfast it was white washed as per standard UGTO practice and it was kept clean by a well trained crew of chefs, orderlies and machines the full base was 10,000 square meters and could dock up to 200 capital ships and 500 lesser size craft it was a middle size base it is located aporx 100,000 feet above the surface of Heaven in a stationery Equatorial low Heaven orbit traveling at 100 kilometers per seconded which kept it over the exact same point over the surface which was better as ship autopilots don’t constantly need to update the position of the base which gives a lesser chance of a crash with the base or worse the planet.

The layout was a joint double circle with the circles have a top and bottom like a can both circles have docking points at every point possible and a joint by a sky bridge which has to be avoided with a docking point or when docking as it could cause serious damage to both ship and station.
As a recent add on to the sky bridge another piece of docking points were added, these were then covered by a super structure which completely engulfed it. In order to gain entry the large doors had to be open which allowed entry this is the dock. It is the same dock Juex and his crew docked with and where the ICC ships were also docked as no one could see from the outside what was in and earned the name ‘Lightbreakers dungeon’ since all who entered were rarely seen again in the general fleet unless they were dignitaries and politicians in which case no one really cared what happen to them.

Juex walk to the nearest ABV or automated base vehicle which constantly moved between points on its route throughout its given sector, they never stop so you have to run and quickly jump on and grab something to stay on. Juex spotted one around ten meters away and stood where he was in a position ready to jump on as it approached he ran a bit forward and jumped on, he was quickly helped onto the ABV by a aging Marine Colonel as the Colonel was helping Juex, Juex spoke up

“Oh my god it’s you” “I thought you died at Fartsey” “Sorry do I know you Sir?” ask the Colonel

“1st Rear Admiral Juex, I was the commanding officer of the E.S.S Invictus during the ten battle of Tau Ceti”

The Colonel eye lit up and he laughed “No those Iccike ground troops a pussys compared to us back then sir”

“How the hell you been Greare all these years and you stubble into my piece of the Galaxy again”

“Well I’ve been great been great after Fartsey I took command of the pocket of Marines who tried holding off the ICC counter-attack”

“Yeah I heard they took it back shortly after we left” replied Juex

“Yes it didn’t last long me and my men managed to escape with some POW’s from the surface, we then found a ICC supply ship still docked so with the help of the POW’s some of whom were Navy crewmen we hijacked it and flew to the nearest friendly planet”

“Wow that’s quite a tall tale my friend how’d you go afterwards?” ask Juex

“Well after we got back we stayed on base for a month and then we moved on, we were on probation for four years just incase we had been brainwashed by ICC ground forces” replied Greare.

Really? Four years?”

“yes the brainwashing effects are believed to go away after four years cause the brain slowly regains control of the part shutdown and tamped with, well that’s what they think anyway” said Greare.

Can’t trust them can ya?

“No you can’t, no you can’t.”

“Sorry but I got to go, coming up too my stop” said Juex “it’s been great catching up, good luck out there man”

“Same here” replied Greare.

Juex stood up and quickly hoped off the ABV and hit the floor running, he quickly slow to a walking pace and began heading towards the doors that led into the covered dock. As he approached the doors he noticed a sign above the doorway in red ‘Lightbreakers Dungeon Enter at own risk’ Juex Chuckled to it, the whole base have seem to add more ‘scariness’ of what their commander doe’s in there.
J
uex was about to enter the doors when a large marine exited

“I need to see some I.D there sir” the Marine asked.
Juex handed over his UGTO Navy I.D which is meant to be carried by all UGTO naval personal everywhere they go in uniform and waited for the Marine named Billy to process his I.D.

“All done sir, you may enter. Also the boss would like you too see him in his office.” Said Billy

“Thank you” replied Juex

Juex couldn’t remember quite where Lightbreakers office was but knew if he found a Map he’d find it sure enough. As he was heading towards what he thought was a map he was stopped.

“Just the man I was looking for” said Lightbreaker.

“Arr there you are sir you wanted me? Replied Juex

“Yes I did, did you read what was in the folder?”

“Yes sir I did, and really? I mean this mission is something that could be done though Naval intelligenance not though the regular navy, it’s a simple Intel mission nothing that requires undercover ships for god sakes” said Juex

“I have been kept in the dark just as much as you Juex, so I couldn’t tell you why. But it may be due to that the both ICC and K’luth are on peace talks with both us and each other and if the ICC is near failure it could mean the full force of the K’luth which isn’t good for us or them. Not to mention a forth unknown force acting upon us all the K’luth and ICC as well as ourselves have had entire fleets go missing and from what little that’s left afterwards we know it’s not just Pirates.”


“This gets stranger by the minute” answered Juex

“I know, but hey we live in a place where the borders are literally Limitless in every direction. So good luck out there friend…and stay safe”

“Thank you sir I will”
Lightbreaker started walking away when he stopped

“You also own me new Carpet and a bottle of vodka!” he yelled.

“Stick it old man!” Juex yelled back with a smile.

Lightbreaker bust up laughing “You seem to forget you 220 years older then me!”

Juex had forgotten that ‘small’ detail about his age “Crap” he thought “got me their” Juex turned and began walking to what he believed was the dock which the ICC ships were parked to his surprise he was correct and walked over to the gangplank and found her crew boarding the C.S.S VOIN and behind him the NEPOBEIMYI’s crew were also boarding.

Captain Furlough approached Juex she stopped came to attention and saluted and then snapped back to a normal stance
“C.S.S VOIN ready and waiting for clearance Sir!” she yelled.
“Ok now I have something here that I’d like added into the ships mainframe” replied Juex as he said that he handed over a small computer chip.

“Um yes sir I will have the Flight Sergeant look at it sir”

“Make sure it’s fitted BEFORE I leave ok”

“Aye sir”

Juex walked with the VOIN’s captain onto the gangplank and on board the VOIN the ICC Cruiser hull weren’t as tall as the UGTO Cruiser hulls but were wider at the ‘Hip’ then the UGTO’s.
It was the complete opposite in design then the UGTO’s ships, ICC ships were angler in design utilizing squares and triangles, they were dark in colour with a grey-black main body coat and blue lines throughout the edges made for a rather ‘Human’ looking ship compared to the UGTO’s ships which more like 20th century sci-fi Alien ships with there smooth and rounded edges and bright white paint.

The interior was much like the exterior in its dark colours and used bluelish white LED lighting to light up the rooms giving the room a bit of a blue ‘tinge’ Furlough escorted Juex though the main areas of the ship the Guest quarters, engine room and bridge on the bridge there were things straight away noticed first off there were the major things In UGTO ships the bridge is around 20 meters square on a Cruiser the captain has a chair situated aprox 5 meters and in the center of the rear wall, in front of him/her there is a straight 2 meter wide path that extends towards the forward look platform on the bridge.

On the left and right of this path the entire floor sinks one meter so that the path is raised on the left there are is the navigation crew in the center of there side is a raised glass navigation screen which displays the current solar system with all ships marked on it as well as all known planets, under the Nav screen is a range of consoles including Manual flight controls, T-drive computer and engine controls the Navigation officer is in charge of this station.

On the right is another Nav screen which display the exact same as the other on but also display weapons data such as ships weapons ranges, torpedo solutions, ships range and the damage on the Amour, shields and Hull of enemy ships as well as there own which tells the weapons control officer who is the best target to engage, the consoles underneath have the torpedo solution computer, missile computer and proton gun firing controls and like the navigation side is crew by young enlisted personal, in small ships the WCP would be a enlisted person.
All this information is then fed though to a display to the Captains HUD (heads up display) so he or she can choose the best action to proceed with the HUD also has display filters so it is easier to sort though information the ships XO stood in the middle repeating orders given by the captain right after he/she had said them.

That was a UGTO ship, the ICC Bridge was completely alien to Juex it was only 15 meters square smaller then the UGTO it look completely different.
First the entire deck was level. Then the Captain’s chair was at the front of the bridge around 5 meters from the bridge view to the left and right the WCO and Nav officer sat 2 meters from the Captain in front of them stood a small 20 inch display screen which displayed their respected information. For the Captain he had a smaller 15 inch glass screen coming from the left arm of his/her’s chair with both Navigation and weapons information and unlike UGTO ships the ICC captains had the options on his screen to fire weapons, and to program and activate the T-drive without the need for the WCO or Nav officer doing it for him which during combat if either were incapacitated it would not effect performance.

Behind the chairs were the nerves of the ICC Bridge there stood the large glass displays like on UGTO ships, infact they were exactly the same in design as each other a person trained in the ICC Navigation computer could use the UGTO navigation computer with ease same said for the weapons controls, there was one slight difference in the set up in that the displays faced the wall and the helm controls were directly behind the captain with a same nav screen to work off.

Here XO here did not repeat commands like in the UGTO but more was in charge in if should a problem arise such as a unidentified object it would first be taken though the XO and if need be taken to the captain who then would decide what to do this gave relief to the captain that he/she does not constantly have to check everything and trusts that he/she is given only the relevant information needed at the time.

“You guys have quite the setup here” said Juex towards the VION’s Captain

“Yes we do sir, how do you like it?” she asked

“A big difference then UGTO ships I tell ya”

“Yes I know I’ve served aboard a small Picket destroyer on Pirate patrol in the UGTO navy”

“Really? They giving defectors ships now ae?” ask Juex this was no surprise the Juex, he himself was given the command of a ship only a day after he woke, but he wanted to see what she would say.

“Apparently you do sir, but only small crappy ones just too make sure we won’t simply ditch back to the ICC with one of your flash EAD’s”

“Good answer” Juex thought “Doesn’t surprise me really” when they found me they gave me a rank and a ship and told me to suck it up and fight”

“Sir?” She asked

“Err never mind I’ll tell you later” replied Juex
J
ust as she was about to reply a middle aged man approached

Ma’am the cloaking modification Marshal Lightbreaker requested has been added and is….ready”

“Cloaking mod?” asked Juex

“Lightbreaker didn’t want us being seen leaving so we built in a K’luth cloaking device into both ships”

“But we’ve been have power issues” said the Man

“As the commander said we’ve been having issues getting enough power to the cloak” said Larna

“Yes sir, Ma’am since the K’luth utilize Anti-Matter power sources we’ve been having trouble getting enough power to the cloak without blowing out our reactors or the cloak itself I came just to inform you’s that we have now the right power solution but.”

“But what” said Juex

“Well sir we can use it, but only once after which we will short circuit the part that bends the light around the ship, the center of the cloak really” replied the Commander

“If we got another one could we use it?” ask Larna

“Yes we could Ma’am but only once” replied the Commander

“What about the UGTO? Could they do the same?” ask Juex

“Yes sir but like us they’d be restricted to only one use since they use the same type of power source as us, only a Anti-matter reactor has enough power in the right dosage and flow rate to power the cloak multiple times, not to mention computer clashes we’ve had with the K’luth’s software.
“Ok thank you Commander that is all” said Larna
The Commander turned and headed back towards the engine room on the other end of the ship.

“Well shall we?” said Larna

“Yes please do, I’ll stand back and watch” replied Juex

“Sir”

Larna then proceeded to her chair and sat down, quickly too did the Nav and WCO sit in there respected seats

“Comm hail door control and get those doors open, helm fire up all primary reactors and get ready to disengage dock locks”

“Aye ma’am! Starting reactors and readying disengagement procedures….Engines are coming online and are ready Ma’am!”

“Commander ready the cloak!”

“Yes Ma’am cloak is ready for your command to engage” Said the
Commander over the ship intercom”

“Ma’am! Door control report doors are now open”

“Copy, inform the other ship”
“Aye ma’am message away!

“Commander Engage cloak on my mark!”
“Aye ma’am ready”

“Helm disengage locks and head for the opening”
“Aye Ma’am! Disengaging now……..we have separation ma’am and now are cruising towards doors!”

“Commanders! Active cloak on my mark 3…2…1….Mark!”
“Ma’am! Both ships are now cloaked”

“Copy…he…”
“Captain” yelled out Juex

“Sir!”
“Did you put that stuff I wanted into the mainframe?”

“Yes sir it was added just before”
“Great, find it on your display and find the song ‘Fake it’ by Seether please”

“Umm just a minute sir…..here we are playing now sir”
“Thank you, I think you’ll find the song’s words entirely suiting of our situation”

The song started playing no one really took notice till the chorus
“Just fake it if you’re out of direction, fake it if you don’t belong, just fake it if you’re out faction your just a hypocrite you lost your self esteem along the way I can fake it with the best of anyone I can fake it with the best of them all I can fake it all just too know if your soul will fade at all the one you sought too fool the world……”

Larna Grinned “Highly suitable sir, highly suitable”

“Ma’am! We are now clear of the doors!”

Juex spoke up

“Comm send a message to Lightbreaker bidding him farewell and good luck, Helm set course for the Tau Ceti gate in the Luycen system”

“Aye sir!” yelled both Comm and Helm.

Both ships lined up, then like nothing they were speeding towards the Tau ceti gate in the Luycen system the entire trip would be done in FTL since traveling though the inter-system gates was too risky the T-drive would take a pounding but hey it was worth it the entire 100,000GU+ trip would take only ten minutes.

“Ma’am we’re coming up to our stop point”

“Aye helm prepare to drop from FTL”

Then suddenly the ship dropped from FTL

“What the?”

“Report!” yelled Larna

“Ma’am there appears to be a Jump disruptor in the area!”

“Dammit!”

Then the was a large explosion

What the hell was that?”

“Ma’am! We’re taking fire! returning fire now!” replied the WCO

The VOIN and its escort had just jumped into a full fledge skirmish between the ICC and UGTO forces, this was going to test there cover and abilities to the limit.

“NO! Hold fire we’re still cloaked!” yelled Larna

“Not anymore” said Juex in a Carm voice pointing towards the Gunboat Destroyer Blazing down towards them “That use to be me doing that” thought Juex

“Return fire then!” yelled Larna

ICC ships used ammunition based Railguns which had far better range then and efficiency then the UGTO’s Proton cannons, but at the cost that it needed ammo or it couldn’t fire.
“Ma’am Admiral Wilson is hailing us!” yelled the Comm officer
“!!$%#^##! Juex hide quickly before he sees you” yelled Larna.
Soon as Juex hid Comm patched Admiral Chance Wilson though.
“Good too see you again Larna, but I must keep it short”, Sparks and downed bodies could been seen in the background “Fire everything on the EAD’s!, you know our Combat Dreadnoughts can’t tango with those beasts!” then the picture cut.

“Juex your good now!”

Juex came back on the bridge. The C.S.S VOID broke away from its escort and turned for a strafing run on the nearest Elite assault Dreadnaught, which happened to belong to none other then Marshal Klingon himself, a knot grew inside Juex’s gut he didn’t like this, the death the desuction the killing of fellow humans while the scurge of the Alien K’luth are murdering both ICC and UGTO everyday. Then suddenly something appeared in the middle of the fleet action.

“Ma’am! We have a K’luth Dreadnought and a Paradise cruiser directly ahead!”

“Hold fire on that EAD!, aim everything at those dam Lobsters!”

Their is a unspoken rule during combat between ICC and UGTO forces If the K’luth attack during fighting between both, they would all stop and aim for the K’luth it was one of the few times the ICC and UGTO could be seen working together without hesitation, even if it does go against orders from high command they were both human after all, after both sides finish with the K’luth out of respect for each other during each’s time of need they do not resume fighting and go there separate ways peacefully.

It was like magic, like the hand of god himself struck down on the K’luth ships the UGTO ships were up close firing with every laser and torpedo they could get firing on the Dread and the ICC ships hitting it from range with their Railguns and Missiles, the poor K’luth didn’t stand a right chance in hell within mere minutes a UGTO torpedo struck the Anti-matter reactor in the aft section of the ship sending the entire aft end into space dust. The cruiser seeing there larger ship blown up in mere minutes fled.
The Crew aboard the VOIN were up and cheering at the sight of the K’luth Mandible being finished by it’s very own escort ship.

“Job well done captain!” yelled Juex with a big smile

“Thank you sir!” she yelled back over the cheering

“Why don’t we say we get out of here?” Juex replied

“I agree!”

“Helm set course for Farstey!”

“Aye Ma’am setting course, we will have to wait till we’re out of the disruptor field first” said the Navigation officer seated next to her

“Aye full speed ahead!”
A
fter five minutes of traveling they were finally cleared to jump.

“Nav Jumping on my mark….three…..two…..one…..MARK!”
And then they were gone, gone on another adventure this time from the otherside of the fence into a unkown world into a unknown relm……….


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Posted: 2011-01-07 16:34   
I like the part you made for me, I hope Ill be in it more. Over all 4 out 5 because some words were miss spelled and there were 2 grammer mistakes. But besides that it was awsome.


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Posted: 2011-01-07 21:24   
I haven't been in a story yet... was wondering if you have room for one more character?
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Posted: 2011-01-07 22:16   
I have the Perfect role for you, how ever it will be in chapter nine or maybe even ten.

Sorry. But don't worry you will be added.


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Quote:

On 2011-01-07 21:24, -Shadowalker-™ wrote:
I haven't been in a story yet... was wondering if you have room for one more character?





if you like i can type for 30 seconds about the time you took my suppy out because you forgot to stop your ship
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Quote:

On 2011-01-08 05:17, jamesbob wrote:
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On 2011-01-07 21:24, -Shadowalker-™ wrote:
I haven't been in a story yet... was wondering if you have room for one more character?





if you like i can type for 30 seconds about the time you took my suppy out because you forgot to stop your ship




srry, new years party and all, must have sliped my mind.
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Posted: 2011-01-08 18:08   
I Really Love The Story Keep Up The Good Work!! Mate!

And I Also Love My Character jejejej ^^!

I Want Mooooreeee xD!
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NZ-juex16
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*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-01-09 18:31   
The Bad.

I'll be out of Internet as where i'm going away for a few days does't have a connection. This means that Chapter eight might not be out for up to four days.

The Good.

Both Chapter's eight and nine will come out together.....maybe ten as well.

The Maybe.

I might be able to release Eight early but no promises.


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U.W.S Melborne

I.S.S Achilles

Author of Stanger in a Strange land.

NZ-juex16
Admiral
*Renegade Space Marines*


Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-01-10 04:58   
I typed as fast as i can and i was able to push out chapter eight, bit shorter then intented but hey....i couldn't leave you all hanging now could i?
Good new is i should have both chapters nine and ten come out togther and maybe even 11 if you lucky... all people who've requested parts upto NOW will be in within those two chapters anyone else who post after this WILLNOT get a part till chapter 11.



Chapter Eight
Ten years prior.

E.S.S INVICTUS

Juex stood at the front of the cramped bridge watching.

He was watching the ship travel at almost three times the speed of light….he was amazed he couldn’t believe what he was seeing.

“Sir” yelled the Helmsmen

“Go ahead Hernandez” replied Murry.

“We’re approaching No Water sir two minutes out.”

”Aye” replied Murry.

The UGTO Assault corvette is the smallest combat ship in the UGTO fleet the entire ship can fit inside the engine bay of a Cruiser. Corvettes were around 35 meters Square with the bridge being only eight meters wide and fives meters in length. The ship was crewed with four officers’ ten Non-commissioned officers and twenty enlisted sailors. The role’s of weapon control officer, Navigation officer and Helm officer which is normally crewed by commissioned officers is instead crewed by high ranking NCOs with twenty plus years in the Navy to help with the newly commissioned and young officers to help guide them and train them in combat and leadership which wasn’t taught in the Officer academy.

The layout of the bridge is slightly different to other ships due it its smaller size. First off the two large Glass panels sunk into the floor seen on all other ships are not present onboard scout ships. Instead a single glass panel at the rear of the bridge with both Navigation information and weapon information and helm and weapons control consoles located just forward and to the left and right of the captain’s chair which was located two meters in front of the glass panel.

The Consoles held the normal controls for both weapon and Helm control, in front of the manual controls for the helm had a small 14 inch screen displaying what was on the larger glass panel to the rear, same for the weapons control that had the same but in front of the manual firing controls.

The Assault corvette was loaded, she carried two heavy particle cannons one standard chemical laser and two Proton torpedo tubes she was armed to the teeth with every weapon you could fit on a ship that size, if the engineers could fit more weapons they would.

“Sir!, we’ve dropped from FTL” Yelled out the Helm officer a one Petty Officer Miguel Hernandez.

“Roger Helm set the autopilot for Orbit” replied Chief Seaman Murry.

“Aye chief” replied Hernandez. Since Chief Seaman was the highest NCO rank they were the only Enlisted apart from basic trainers that were called ‘Sir’ but most just called them ‘Chief’ yet they were not to be confused with Chief Petty officers if they were present.

Juex stood their. He just stared though the windows at No water. No emotion. No sense of humanity on him. He looked shell shocked tears could be seen slowly rolling down his checks.

“Sir?....are you okay” asked Chief

Juex wiped the tears quickly.

“Yes…yes I am…..it’s just….when I was a kid I imagined and I wished so hard that I…I”

“You what sir?” ask Chief

“Never mind, don’t worry about it ae mate I’ll be fine” replied Juex with a smile.

“Um if you say so sir, it’s you seemed pretty…..out of it, more then usual for a person who sees a different for the first time.” Said the Chief

“If you must know. This is my first time in space.” Said Juex

“What? Really? Then how did you go though the Academy?....the darn thing IS in space.”

“Well I didn’t go to the Academy, I have no formal UGTO naval training at all”
Chief Seaman Murry stood there. He couldn’t believe what had been told to him. The captain of the ship had no military training at all.

“What!?! How can that be? How on gods green earth did you get this command!, wait how did you even get a commission and rank?” Asked Murry


“Well that’s the hard part, I can’t tell you about how I attained rank and this ship what I can tell you is that is was ordered by Grand-Admiral Flash personally”

Murry stood there even more shocked he even had the Admiralty in his pocket. “Who was he?” he wondered “but it’s not of me to know” he said to himself

“Sirs!” yelled Hernandez “We are now in orbit”
Chief Murry looked at Juex

“Your ship sir” he said holding his hand out towards the Captain’s chair “It’s now time for you to take command”

Juex looked at his Chair, he slowly began walking towards it. The eyes of all on deck watched him, as he approached it he turned around and began slowly lowing himself into the chair. As he wriggled his backside into a comfortable slight lean on his right thigh he looked at everyone looking at him.

“What now?” he asked

“I don’t know sir” Said Murry “But I’d guess we go looking for some action….wouldn’t you?”

Although it seemed like Murry was implying at Juex was stupid to make him look bad, it was in fact his way of training new ship Captains by not out right telling them, but instead of ‘hinting’ at what he should do next.

“Umm sure, Err Communications operator please sends a request for where there is fleet action” Said Juex Hesitantly.

“Just Comm Sir” Replied the young Comm operator “Message is away”

“Thank you Comm” said Juex

Murry Smiled, “he’s getting there” he thought.

“Sir! Incoming message. It’s Fleet-Admiral Fa Klingon he says there is large action over in the Tau Ceti system around a planet called Fartsey.”

“Err where’s that?” asked Juex.

“Over here sir” said Murry from behind Juex

Juex got up and walked towards the Glass Display Screen.

“We are here” Said Murry showing Juex where they were. “And Fartsey is here” He said pointing at the Tau Ceti system on the Paned out view of the entire mapped Galaxy “We would have to travel though to the Luycen gate here” He said pointing at the gate on the map “And we then proceed to the gap that sits between the two stars in the Luycen system to the Tau Ceti Gate here” Murry said showing Juex, who watched heavily interested “Then it’s a simple matter of traveling around the Tau ceti Sun to give us a straight shot at Fartsey”

Juex stood their watching adamantly.

“How long would it take us?” he asked

“Pfft around ten minutes max sir” Murry replied

“Very well, set course for Fartsey then good sir”

“Aye sir setting course into Autopilot computer now” Replied Murry.

“Comm inform the Admiral we are on our way” Said Juex.

“Aye sir Message away”

The ship creaked and shuddered as the single IE engine began running at full thrust, soon the ship would be traveling at over 35V.

“Sir we’re ready to jump” Said Chief

Juex walked back to his Chair and sat down into his now normal slight leaned over sitting stance. He pushed a button on his chair that he knew connected him to the engine room and to Midshipman Smith.

“Smithy!, Could you please plug up a song for me?” asked Juex

“Arr no I cannot sir, however I did downloaded all music onto the ships mainframe, so just push the green button on the left arm and it will bring a holographic display from which you can choose from.” Replied Smith

“Um ok I’ll try it then” said Juex who the cut the connection.

Juex quickly found the button and pressed it, a small holographic display soon formed in front of his lap, he scrolled down till he found what he was looking for.

“Sir? We are ready to jump, we are waiting for your command to do so” Said Murry

“In a minute man, I’m searching for something” said Juex.

He pressed the name of the song he wanted. Aerials by System of the Down, the opening silence of the 21st century rock song, then a slow strumming of a Guitar could be herd.

“Jump on my mark!, 3….2…..1…..MARK!” yelled Juex

Just as Murry was pulling down the lever that activated the T-Drive a lyric came over from the song

“Cause we the ones who always the one who wuna play always wuna go but the ones who never wuna stay we are the ones that wuna choose but we’re the ones who don’t want to lose”

That simple chorus basicly just summed up the entire adventure they were about to enter.

“Sir we’re now in FTL, 30 seconds till we drop for the Luycen gate.” Said Murry.

“Roger” replied Juex.

The ship quickly dropped from FTL and hit the space running in that it was already traveling at full speed when it exited FTL.

“Gate dead ahead!” yelled the Young sailor at the controls.

“Roger thanks” said Juex in reply.

“So what happens now?” ask Juex.

“We will travel though the gate, it will then transport us into the Luycen system where we’ll jump to the Tau ceti gate on the other side of the solar system.”

“Wow, ok seems easy enough” replied Juex.

“Sir moving in to position for the jump between Stars” said the helmsman.

“Aye, make sure it’s dead on or we’ll fly straight into one of the suns.” Said Murry.

Hernandez, a seasoned Helmsman had preformed this jumped this many times before but none the less it was still dangous as the gap between the stars was quite small and if you’re even a little to the left of right….bye bye you go.

The Scout ship cruised at 35V and quickly found the white line signafinying that they were cleared to jump with nothing blocking them.

“Jumping! In 3……..2………1 Jump!” yelled out Murry.

Soon they were cruising at FTL though the Luycen system within seconds they had traveled millions of kilometers and thought nothing of it.

“Sir! We’ve finished jumping and are now moving towards the Tau Ceti gate” cried out the Helmsman.

“Roger” replied Juex. “Proceed to the combat zone, Koslof!,”

“Aye Sir” replied the Weapons controls officer.

Petty Officer Alexander Koslof was a 12 year naval vet, he joined as a Jnr weapons control Technician at age 17 and has been in all major action at and around the Luycen area all his career before taking on the role of Chief Weapons Control officer on board the INVICTUS. He loved everything that made a bang and made other things go bang, namely K’luth, when he was in middle teens a K’luth planetary raiding party attacked his home world in the R33 system, as this was before the K’luth were known to the ICC or UGTO each blamed each other but could not explain why nothing was seen and the description given by survivors was not of humans but of a Alien figure with four arms.

Ever since then he’s dedicated his life to killing every single K’luth that he could, something he has kept true always joining ships that fight in known K’luth space he hates them and will stop at nothing to see them banished from this universe at all costs.

“Koslof order your man down in weapons bay to perform checks on all weapons before we enter the combat zone.” Said Juex

“Aye sir forwarding message now……..roger sir he reports that all weapons are checked, loaded, primed and ready to fire” replied Koslof.

“Roger” replied Juex “Um isn’t there something I’m missing, don’t we go into some sort of….like high alert mode? Or something?” Juex asked Murry.

“Yes it’s called Battle stations” said Murry.

“Ok…..um which button is that? Asked Juex looking down around the arm rest next to him.

“Red one”

“Ahh ok” Juex pressed the a red button

“Ship self destruct activated 10….9”

“?$$~*^@~! How I turn it off!” yelled Juex panicked

“Press it again!”

Juex pressed it again

“No again!”

“Juex pressed t three times in quick succession”

“Self destruct off” said a quiet voice

“What the hell was that sir!” yelled Murry.

“You said red button man!” yelled back Juex

“Yeah the one with GC on it! Not the one with SD on it, you were two seconds from killing us all!”

“Ok ok we’ll take this as a lesson that I need to be told WHICH red button to press ok?

“Aye sir” said Murry.

Juex found the other red button, and this time it worked fine, with no self blowing anything coming online. A voice and Alarm sounded

“All hands at you battle stations!!” “Woop woop all hands at Battle stations woop woop all hands at battle stations”

“Sir we’ve crossed though the gate and are in the Tau Ceti system” said the Helmsman.

“Roger activates all ECM’s now” replied Murry out of order.

“ECMs?” asked Juex

“Electronic counter measures, so they can’t see us on sensors” explained Murry.

“Ah I see.” Replied Juex.

The corvette quickly turned so that it could travel around the sun in the center of the system it was at full speed and everybody was nervous, most of the young crew this was their first time in combat and UGTO statistics didn’t favor them either, more then ¼ to a 1/3 of all new recruits who enter combat for the first time this jumped the smaller the ship they are on…….these poor souls only had a 50% chance in major fleet action to come out alive…..this didn’t look good for them.

“Sir! We’re cleared to jump.” Yelled out Murry.

“roger, jump when ready…..but arr could you please make us land near a big ship, maybe we could use them for cover from our drop form FTL”

“Um aye sir that’s not a bad idea” replied Murry.
The ship jumped into FTL, not for long only ten seconds and they were at Sub-light speeds again. Murry had made the ship drop a little bit back from the larger fleet action between the dreadnoughts and cruisers and dropped right next to a one Fleet-Admiral Sherman’s Elite Assault Dreadnaught which was reentering combat from repairs it needed at the supply depots located behind the main line of action.

From his point of view Juex could only see the small white specks of the UGTO ships as they were white and could be easily seen and the lights and flashes of weapons, he couldn’t quite make out everything as his eyes still hadn’t recovered fully from hibernation yet he thought of something: Star Wars “Star Wars?” he thought where have I heard that? “Wait! I remember! It was a series of movies I liked watching ummm arrr bugger what were they bout again?......” Juex looked out the window “Space wars” He had his first memory from before he was found….but what did it mean? Was it truly his body reminding him about a muched liked series of movies or something that would trigger more? Only time would tell.

“Sir!, we have a able target weapons platform bearing 230 700GU!” Yelled Koslof.

“Risk against our ship?” asked Juex

“Low to moderate sir”

“Fire all guns!” yelled Juex

The ship thudded as all the weapons on board began firing and a massive thud as the two torpedo tubes fired, the ship then began a zigzag Patten of movement to avoid any fire directed towards them. Sometimes it worked sometimes not and sometimes it made you get hit by more shells then if you flew straight……but the pros outweighed the cons.

“Sir Weapons are away!” yelled Koslof

“Roger keep firing!” yelled Juex.

Behind and below them the gun crews were working profusely to reload the weapons 5 seconds for the Guns and 10 for the torpedoes but they were only seven men reloading five weapons, it took two each for the torpedoes as they weighed a fair bit and the ship was too small for a automatic re loader.

The ship fired another Volley of cannon and torpedoes the shield on the weapons platform had only been dinted and they would need bigger fire power to help take it out.

“Comm request a Destroyer to fire a broadside onto the weakened side of the platform.” Asked Juex, the ship still thudded from the weapons continually firing at 5 and 10 seconded intervals.

“Aye sir the E.S.S ROBSON is firing now” replied the Comm officer.

The Bridge crew watched as the Assault Destroyer E.S.S ROBSON flew right up to the opened up part of the shield and let rip with a full load of Guns, lasers and its heavy load of torpedoes.

On Board the Weapons platform it’s self a young Marine Lieutenant stood the helping up a younger private to his feet.

“Report what the hell just hit us?” he yelled

“Sir we have a shield breach on sections between 67 and 80 degrees.”

“Crap” he thought “there’ve got a clear shot to the hull now”

“Ready Auto-destruct if we fall below 5% hull integrally”

“Aye sir it’s primed and ready”

“And that’s yes sir dammit private, we ain’t no squidly.”

“Yes sir”

Back on board the INVICTUS Juex was just being informed by the commander of the ROBSON that the platforms shield had been penetrated and they had a clear shot.

“Thank you Captain much appreciated” said Juex

“No problem INVICTUS always ready to help a bucking ship like yours, ROBSON out”

“Sir! We are reading that the hull on board the Weapons platform is down to forty per cent” yelled Koslof.

“Rog-“

There was a large explosion from the Amour outside the ship; they’d been hit……badly.

“SIR! Amour on the port bow is down to 2% and we are reporting hull damage in the related sections!”

“Switch from firing from the port side to Starboard, Increase speed!” yelled
Juex “Can someone get me the Lieutenant please!”

“Sir already here sir!” yelled the Marine commander, a one 2nd Lieutenant (LEFT-TEN-IT not LU-TEN-IT) Lance Greare.

“Ready your troops, your raiding that Platform!” said Juex

“Yes Sir be two minutes Sir!” replied Greare.

“Helm set a course so that the Lieutenant and his men can board with the least time exposed to Point defenses!” Juex hadn’t been in Space warfare long, but already knew what the Point defense did, and he wanted as little risk as possible to his marines. A ship as small as Juex’s only carried a small Platoon housed below decks to make room. They used slow transports and regularly Marines got butchered alive before even landing on board there intended target.

“Sir we’re ready!” said Greare over the Intercom.

“Roger, making our run now!” said Juex.

The ship speeded up to full speed, even going over the maximum design
speed to 40V they fired everything they could to put off the weapons platform, then when they got to forty GU the marines dropped and began traveling forward towards the platform, they didn’t need to travel far and were soon on board.

“Alright Marines these Ickies think there tough!, they think there better then us! They think just cause we are older, stronger and better then they are that that earns them to right to call themselves freedom fighters!?! NO! It doesn’t!, so when you go in there you give em hell marines!” yelled Greare

All the marines just looked forward at Greare, no emotion.

“HOORAH!” they all yelled. There was a thud as the ship linked to the platform and the computer automatically began a blow torch which started cutting though the thick steel of the platform, as it was about to finish Greare spoke up again.

“Here we go Marines!....” The steel fell though and Marines began pouring though the newly formed door yelling at the top of there lungs.

“Move! Move! Move! The Marine Corp isn’t paying us by the hour!” yelled Greare as he bust though the Door. As he came though a Marine shot and killed a ICC counter-boarding person “No sir” He yelled “they should be paying by the kill!” he laughed.

“We would run the UGTO treasury dry if they did that!” yelled out another.

The marines were taking only light casualties and were quickly moving though the Platform and soon were at the control room, heavy automatic rifle noises could be heard throughout the Platform and the dead and dying were pushed aside to make room for the attacking marines.

“Sir! Yelled a Marine”, “We’ve taken the control room!”

“Great tell Jue…..”

“Sir! The Self Desutct is on! Twenty seconded left on the clock!”

“Everybody fallback! Fallback to the transport! MOVE MOVE!”

The marines started sprinting back towards there transport ignoring everything including there own wounded.

“Sir Lieutenant Greare reports they’ve taken the…. Oh my sir look!”

Juex looked at the control station….his mouth dropped he couldn’t believe what he was seeing.

“Who fired on the platform!” he demanded

“Nobody sir! It came from within the platform!” yelled back the sensor operator.

“Dammit!” he thought, “the dam crew must have used the SD when they knew they couldn’t hold them off.

It seemed to all stop, go silent, to go fuzzy; he couldn’t believe it he was in his own world, stuck in his mind NO! This couldn’t be! Who did he lose them! “NO!” he yelled.

He felt something go round his shoulders he looked to his left. It was the Ships XO Amy…..she was covered in blood she must have been helping the medic with the injured from the damaged sections “its ok sir, it happens, there’s nothing you can do” she said.

She unwrapped her arm and walked back to her normal position on deck.
“Sir!, the ICC fleet is retreating!”

Suddenly a great weight was lifted from his shoulders….it was over.
Well at least for now, his ship was badly damaged and he had lost all his marines and for what?....his first battle kill? Yes but he also had his first battle loss.

But unknown to him at the time the marines had indeed gotten off the Platform alive, there transport had taken a hit and crashed onto the surface of Fartsey.

“Well we better Bug outa here, Helm find us a place we can get repairs.”

“Aye sir there is a captured shipyard in orbit, setting course now.”

“Well you didn’t do too badly for a Noob” said Murry.

“Anytime you walk away you did well I reckon” Replied Juex

“Hey don’t worry about the marines; they knew what they were doing and what can happen.

“I know, but doesn’t mean anything, there still people with families, kids, wife’s girlfriends, husbands, boyfriends they still died out there.”

“If you’ve been in this as long as I have you’ll learn that life out here is as about as Special as a fly, nobody cares nobody cares that everyday millions die from a needless and pointless war.”

“I know…..I know”

Murry got up and walked back to his post.

Juex pushed the green button for his music. He searched for something that looked good. “Fortunate Son….By clearance Clearwater” “Meh sounds good enough” he clicked and played it.

As the opening strums began to play Juex had a sudden and violent flash back.

There was two objects flying over trees in these machines that looked like the ‘virobirds’ that he’d seen the marines use for planetary transport there were people in them holding very old firearms. Then suddenly it changed, it was of the blonde of the photo that he found his name on she was standing on top a sand dune over looking the sea, she was in fatigues and clutching a rifle. Then Juex blanked out.



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From: Shadows
Posted: 2011-01-10 15:59   
Can't stop my self from reading it. Great job.
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NZ-juex16
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Joined: December 13, 2010
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From: Southland, New Zealand
Posted: 2011-01-12 23:37   
Well i'm back, finally.

Sad news is that i didn't make much head way on Chapter Nine, first night i was fine but the 2nd i started a song and i just couldn't think of anything and my mind stalled.

HOWever what i've come up is far better then intented so it will be better.

Some teaser quotes;

“Well then Marshal shall we talk turkey?”

All the Marshals sat there amazed at what they’ve heard this Young….well not young but what this Rear Admiral had told them.

“And who might you be? And why are you aboard this ICC vessel?” ask Lazurkri.

“Juex Laggman, Grand Marshal Juex Laggman of her majesty’s Sovereign Wolf 1 fleet.”

Like these?, you'll love the full chapter, and you'll love what i have for Chaoter ten even more!
[ This Message was edited by: NZ-juex16 on 2011-01-12 23:44 ]
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From: Shadows
Posted: 2011-01-13 10:19   
Patiently waiting.
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Admiral C. Wilson
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Posted: 2011-01-13 16:40   
I like what I see.





Part that Ill put in my story Admiral Wilson's ship surrounded the renggade ICC ship. The C.S.S Void killed her engines as Chance's boarding partys began to take the ship.
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