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Ship-Of-Fools
2nd Rear Admiral
Angry Mob
Joined: June 10, 2004
Posts: 415
From: USA
|  Posted: 2006-11-27 19:35
I am tring to write I short fan fic,
I need player names, and short personality profiles
u can submit your own name, but u cant submit your own profile (others have to define your personality)
suggestions welcome
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Ship-Of-Fools
2nd Rear Admiral
Angry Mob
Joined: June 10, 2004
Posts: 415
From: USA
| Posted: 2006-11-27 20:20
took 10 mins to write a simple intro "Very" rough draft
need opinions
cut and paste
outline
1 intro small fleet newbs
2 incline
3
INTRO
Man had Finally reached the next frontier.
He could have taken peace, and Love.
And in the beginning he did, in the form of Tools of Science
But it was a harsh place, and in the end, harsh tools where brought.
Man doesn't know how, not to bring the tools of war.
In time, Human competition came into play, and the nations brought those tools to space.
And Humanity learned to make war in space
It was a silent day
A silent day means you can't find the enemy.
Thats acceptable, as it gives the Fleet time to prepare.
As if the Fleets can be truly prepared.
This was a day, a day like others.
Everyone hopes to have something to do,but really doesn't expect it. They spend their time building, and modifying their ships.
For in the days of struggling civilization,it has been left to the commanders of the ships to supply themselves, from their own resources.
Might makes right, and the ultimate might, and right was a Captain of a Man-O-War,
there are acceptations, certain smaller ships only had sufferance, but still demanded a certain degree of respect
This was a time in History, that rewinds Human ability to the days of ancient Rome, when a mans ability was judged by the number of spears he commanded, and how much Gold he had in his treasury.
Simply replace the words Spears with “Ship-to-Ship” offensive capability, and Gold with “credits”
and You have a basis in reality of this day.
A man with enough of both could command anything
for nobody had acknowledged it, but this was a dark day, this was a Modern dark age, when Man had used technology to find his beast
for this was the day Of Empire
and an Empire must expand or Die
This was day that Man Had found DarkSpace
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Lux (Polaris)
Fleet Admiral
Raven Warriors
Joined: April 20, 2004
Posts: 835
From: Asgard
| Posted: 2006-11-27 20:26
It's good..but the spacing throws me off a bit...lol
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Senior Commander of the Raven Warriors, the ICC elite.
Captain of the Assault Dreadnaught \"Gungnir\"
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Ship-Of-Fools
2nd Rear Admiral
Angry Mob
Joined: June 10, 2004
Posts: 415
From: USA
| Posted: 2006-11-27 20:30
sorry about spacing, I do that in new writes for edits later, as I said, it was a cut and paste right out of my Wordproccessor
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Rhiawhyn Zerinth
Fleet Admiral
Templar Knights
Joined: October 31, 2005
Posts: 257
From: I.C.C Deep space refueling station
| Posted: 2006-11-27 20:59
you can use my name in your story
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Ship-Of-Fools
2nd Rear Admiral
Angry Mob
Joined: June 10, 2004
Posts: 415
From: USA
| Posted: 2006-11-27 21:28
I need a personality profile on rhiawhyn
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Rhiawhyn Zerinth
Fleet Admiral
Templar Knights
Joined: October 31, 2005
Posts: 257
From: I.C.C Deep space refueling station
| Posted: 2006-11-28 20:09
kinda hard to give a profile on someone when nobody posts -.-
if nobody wil post i will put my rp profile with a personalty in here for you to go off of
Name: Rhiawhyn Zerinth
Race: Silver dragon (can change into a human at will)
Rank:dragon highlord
personality; Passive,
Rhiawhyn will not attack unless he is attacked or his friends are in danger.
due to his shapeshifting powers only 3 people know he is a dragon and only 1 person has ever seen his dragon form.
Rhiawhyn is rather a quiet person who thinks a lot like the the MI only he dislikes tech insted of biologics, altho he may not like tech he uses what ever he can get (dreads, stations) his crew is extremly loyal and will folow him to the death.
he would give his life to protect humans.
that is all for now.... more later
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Hawk™
Cadet
Joined: July 22, 2003
Posts: 570
From: Lagtopia, Lag system.
| Posted: 2006-11-28 23:12
Put me in as a Kluth Commander
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Ship-Of-Fools
2nd Rear Admiral
Angry Mob
Joined: June 10, 2004
Posts: 415
From: USA
| Posted: 2006-12-03 20:38
could someone link this tread to kluth,ugto,icc history?
just so I can use thread as research link
I am not sure who has done official history of factions
also, pirates, and Mir
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Maskerade
Grand Admiral
Galactic Navy
Joined: March 21, 2002
Posts: 638
From: Canada
| Posted: 2006-12-04 12:06
You can find a significant amount of literature about the history of Darkspace on the Beta site under Documents > Fiction and Lore.
For further information you can look on the Darkspace main site forums in The Universe Today forum. Try focusing on posts by Gideon, but this particular forum is posted in by staff only.
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Fattierob
Vice Admiral
Joined: April 25, 2003
Posts: 4059
| Posted: 2006-12-04 13:37
Gideon's posts are amazingly hard and complicated to follow, to try to extend his style of writing
maybe I just suck.
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