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The Bio of AstralViper |
Astral Viper
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Joined: February 27, 2003
Posts: 343
|  Posted: 2004-10-25 14:57
I lost my original when i reformatted my hd :'( so you all will have to wait untill i get it back up to speed as im just starting on it again today.
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Gideon
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Joined: September 14, 2001
Posts: 4604
From: Oregon, USA
| Posted: 2004-10-25 14:59
I like this bio.
It's very...short.
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Xilaratu
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Joined: May 06, 2004
Posts: 745
From: Florida
| Posted: 2004-10-25 15:04
Quite.
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Astral Viper
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Joined: February 27, 2003
Posts: 343
| Posted: 2004-10-25 15:18
lol i love you guys to well heres the prologue dont expect the first chapter for a while as I havent been in a writing groove for God know how long.
The Story of AstralViper
Prologue
Well when starting a tale its usually best to start at the beginning which is where I will begin my story, as opposed to the recent trend to start in the middle and bounce confusingly around. I was 16 years old and living in the “state” called Florida on Earth, it is on the north American continent in the southwest. I was working on completing my finishing school when I got a message from the United Galactic Naval Command that I had been accepted into the youth pilots program. A new program designed to take the talented youth of the UGTO and start training them in their teens to fly in combat. Well after being accepted , I can assure you it was a dream come true, I left immediately for Mars where the vast majority of the military command and training command were to begin my life as an officer in the United Galactic Navy.
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BackSlash
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Joined: March 23, 2003
Posts: 11183
From: Bristol, England
| Posted: 2004-10-25 16:13
its crap
j.k ... write more!
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Astral Viper
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Joined: February 27, 2003
Posts: 343
| Posted: 2004-10-25 16:14
remind me to add you as a galley slave or something 
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Xilaratu
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Joined: May 06, 2004
Posts: 745
From: Florida
| Posted: 2004-10-25 16:14
We need more fanfic! I love this stuff 
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Coeus {NCX-Charger}
Admiral, I can't read,
Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004
Posts: 3635
From: South Philly
| Posted: 2004-10-25 20:42
Hahahaha
Between you & Linn... you're gonna make me post an organized bio of Coeus
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Astral Viper
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Joined: February 27, 2003
Posts: 343
| Posted: 2004-10-25 20:48
ah but mine involves slavery to the kluth queen and bio enhancements and ... ive said too much.
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Astral Viper
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Joined: February 27, 2003
Posts: 343
| Posted: 2004-10-25 20:48
ah but mine involves slavery to the kluth queen and bio enhancements and ... ive said too much.
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Xilaratu
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Posts: 745
From: Florida
| Posted: 2004-10-25 21:04
Nice double post
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Astral Viper
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| Posted: 2004-10-25 21:10
wow my first double post im so proud well here what i have of ch1 so far i couldnt think of anything else tonight trust it wil be alot longer.
Chapter 1
A man of average height with blue eyes brown hair and a bag slug over one shoulder stepped out of the landing shuttle nervously, it was quiet obvious that had been his first space flight and he was still a little shaken. A tall slender man in a UGTO Naval uniform stepped forward and grasped the strangers hand. “ I’m Admiral Chaos and welcome to the navy young man, what’s your name?” The stranger shook the admirals hand nervously “ I’m Donny Thomas sir and it’s nice to meet you. Although you do have a rather unusual name if I may say so.” Admiral Chaos chuckles lightly at this “ normally you would be quite right but most of the officers in the navy go by call signs rather than their names as they get so used to it. Well shall we go to your new “residence” so we can get you situated?” The Admiral, Donny and the Admirals aides climb into a hover car and speed off towards a distant habitat dome.
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