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NZ-juex16
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From: Southland, New Zealand
|  Posted: 2011-05-26 04:25
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On 2011-05-15 06:07, Da Bes Loser *FCA* wrote:
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All the people standing around the valley stood slient. The Haka when preformed right, sounds awing even with a small group….but when a thousand do it at the top of their lungs, it was defying.
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I know from experience.
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Yeah when the P.M came to our school in, 08 i think it was we had 1000 of us do it, the school ended up having to bring in a structal Enginer, and he said that we can't do Haka's on the 2nd floor balcony anymore cause if we did it again we'd probley snap it....lol
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NZ-juex16
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*Renegade Space Marines*
Joined: December 13, 2010
Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
| Posted: 2011-06-20 23:21
Right..... dear readers i'd like to first off say i'm sorry for the liong time between chapters, life's an ass and school is closing down around me.
BUT school holidays are coming up in 3-4 weeks and thats when i'll be pumping out a few more chapters.
sorry for the delay......massaive delay.
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MaGoo
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From: USA
| Posted: 2011-06-20 23:40
*cries quietly to self* but no, im not doing that, if i were thatd be weird. but then again this is the darkspace community, were we all got one or seven problems, but oh well, were all still fun. My neck hurts.
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From: sol
| Posted: 2011-06-21 22:31
one of the best fan fics ive read in a long long time it really fits together quite nicely  
keep it up.
life can be a witch spelled with a b.
put me in
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Posts: 102
From: Southland, New Zealand
| Posted: 2011-06-26 04:28
Well luckly yous!
Chapter Fifteen.
Juex Sat in one of those fold up lawn chairs with a can of beer in the drink holder and stared at the helicopter he’d taken from the valley.
“What the hell am I going to do with a full Enemy Helicopter?” he asked
Shadowalker who was sitting next to him zipping on his own beer.
Shadowalker Shrugged “not my rebellion you sort it out”
“Your helpful aren’t you?”
Shadowalker Smiled “yup”
2272
“Well we ready?” Asked Admiral Shadowalker
“Aye captain heading out on heading Two niner Fife half sub-light”
“Good jump when 200GU from station”
“Aye sir”
Magoo came to the side of the Admiral,
“We’re away”
“Yup, here go’s nothing”
The ship they took was the U.W.S Discovery as there was no telling what
they were going to meet, it was armed to the teeth and enlarged to fit
ultra-long range high speed sub-light transceivers and other scientific and
exploitation equipment to chart where they would be going and send it Via
Live Sub-light feed to the charters and scientists back at base, this was better in that the ship didn’t have to return and offload there data sets so all UGTO charts could be updated this was a live feed and all computer based charts where being updated live as the unknown was being explored.
They were heading for the Alpha Centauri A system, although this was one of the first systems ever explored when humans first started taking too long range space travel, the coordinates lied 1,000,000,000 GU below it not near any stars just empty space well according to known explorations anyway.
The Discovery was going to first stop off at Earth and visit the place where
Juex is from, and then continue on to UGTO Base DEADEND on the Planet
Nemesis where they’ll take on supplies and a few hard hearted explorers
who had asked to be included on the trip.
EARTH-2272
The Discovery entered Low earth Orbit and put itself on a continues orbit, so that I remained fixed over one location…..New Zealand well what was still above water. After 200 years of Human pollution and Natural Global warming has reshaped the face of the Earth and left her scared and battered, but Earth seems to like change and is always doing so, and Since 2265 due to unknown reasons the Earth has been hit by bitter cold snaps all over the world, so much that the sea level is actually decreasing slowly.
Sadly much of where Juex’s battles took place 251 years ago is under water now but a floating memorial is placed exactly where the town water tower was/is which was where the NZ rebels finally retook the town in late 2020, the first city in the world to be liberated with the help of the ‘Insiders’ a group of moderates from within the hard line Terriosts.
Also 200NM south of Invercargill is one of the world’s last oil deposits
which is drilled for research purposes on how and why it was used by
Humans in the late19th and early 20th century’s western people and it’s
fuel is also used by the small population up further north as fuel for their vehicles as it’s cheaper than fuels currently used for a small community.
Since there was no space port close by, the commanders went down and
simply landed of Spaceport and took a small boat the rest of the way.
Magoo, Shadowalker, Larna and Tucker all stood out on the side decks on each side of the boat all had the ‘thousand mile steer’ watching the water as they slowly cruised through everything was so peaceful.
Larna looked over to Tucker
“Makes you think doesn’t it?”
“Yeah” “It does” “Everything So peaceful, so carm so simple, it’s…it
releases all the stress, constant battling constant death and destruction
and being cooped up on some backwater planet in the middle of the
universe never coming home”
“My first time on Earth” Said Larna
“So beautiful”
The Boat ride was around two and a bit hours. The Boat Captain shut off
the engines and let the boat drift quietly towards the memorial, as they drifted past Shadowalker tossed a reef as the other commanding officers stood at attention and saluted, even the sea hardened boat captain took his cap off and over his heart as they drifted past. Soon the boat began rattling and Restored MB-339c jets screamed overhead at 100FT trailing white smoke, they split and climbed and turned around and made another pass before heading towards the horizon.
After five minutes of the sombre silence, Admiral Shadowalker broke the silence.
“Right let’s roll!....Captain take us home”
“Aye aye Admiral!”
The Boat Captain turned the twin 2000HP diesel engines, the last of their
kind left and pushed them to the limit, they roared to full revs and they
headed back towards there offsite strip.
Meanwhile……
Marshal Rebellion walked into the system commanders office, Chief Marshal Lightbreaker.
“Do you know why you’re here?” Lightbreaker Asked
“No sir I do not”
“Well I have a Question for you my friend”
“Sir?”
“Have you been to Earth?”
“Ah no Sir I haven’t I mean it’s Uggie territory how could i?”
“Well I have”
“Hows that sir”
“Because little known amongst the lower ranks I use to be a battle
hardened Acting Vice-Marshal for the UGTO where I even became commander of a Base, during my time with the Uggies I learnt of a man name Rear Admiral Juex….heard of him?”
“Yes sir I have commander of the Cruiser Ajax, bit of a basted if you ask me
sir”
Lightbreaker smiled
“Yes, he’s known to cause those feelings in his enemy’s on the battle field, what you don’t know is, is that he is over 272 years old, he was the commander of the NZ rebellion and was an instrumental part in our history”
Rebellion was shocked at this news
“But you’re not here to give me a history lesson, so what’s the catch breaker”
“Yes your right and I’ll get straight to the point, my Spies inside the UGTO high command have found out that Juex his in fact fallen into a coma, and for some reason a Cruiser name the Discovery has gone on expedition on information from Juex Dairy, they have installed a live feed exploration data reader, and I have good information on where the Discovery will be heading.”
“And you want me to go after them?”
“No, I will, but you will lead the 2nd ship in my formation, so yes you’ll be
coming”
“When do we leave?”
“Right now…..follow me to your ship”
UGTO BASE DEADEND-2272
Base dead-end was the battle front between the SFA and Early UGTO forces during the 2nd Interstellar war, and many planets still show the scars of that conflict.
“Hurry up people I want this loaded NOW! We should have been out of here 2 hours ago!” yelled Magoo
“Shadowalker walked up beside Magoo
“How we going Mag?”
“Like donkey piss there total retards when it comes to……OI! Be careful
with that!....excuse me, as I was saying there total hicks got no idea what
there doing”
“Hey hey, be fair….they’re Nem Hicks” Shadowalker walked away laughing.
Magoo shock his head…”Ass”
“Sir the Discovery is siting 2,000 GU away and is currently docked inside that station on the far side of the planet.”
Chief Marshal Lightbreaker Popped onto the Captain’s side seat com screen
“Very Good all ships run Slient full ECM”
“Sir”
“Full ECM”
“Aye Sir Full ECM”
The Two ICC ships that had been Hurdy brought were an Assault
Dreadnaught the I.S.S Norman and a Heavy Cruiser the I.S.S Saxon loaded with extra missiles and sensors for exploration.
“Sir, sensors show a Single UGTO Cruiser leaving the planet”
“That’s our ship, follow it, slowly”
“Aye”
“Sir moving at 15GU jumping in 5”
All the commanders stood to the left and right of the Captain’s chair.
“We ready boys?” asked Larna
Shadowalker turned at looked at her
“Ready as I’ll ever be”
“Jumping”
The Discovery Jolted and it speed along at FTL
The Norman and Saxon followed suit.
After twenty minutes in there journey alarms started sounding on the Discovery.
“What’s the Situation Chief?”
“I don’t know sir the Computer is saying there is a dangously high energy
spike in the taycon drive”
“Is it Serious?”
I don’t th..i…….
The Ship shuddered and Dropped from FTL and the main power cut out.
“We’re Drifting sir”
“Back up?”
“Coming soon sir”
“What Now” asked Tucker
“We Sit and wait”
“Back up online sir basics and sub-light only”
“Aye”
“Um Sir we picking up multiable targets on Sensors”
“Where and how many?”
“Two ships on our 7 o’clock and…..”
“And what?”
“I don’t know sir it’s something, one O’clock 1,000GU, should be able to
see it outside”
Shadowalker walked out of his chair and walked to the viewing platform,
and stood stunned.
For before them stood a Massive space station, not human, not K’luth built by someone else, almost Ancient in design it was a mix of straight line and angler design and white and light blue.
As the ship neared the whole station lit up and doors opened.
“Sir!, it’s dragging us in!”
“Full reverse thrust!”
“Nothing’s happening!”
“We’re going in” muttered Shadowalker.
[ This Message was edited by: NZ-juex16 on 2011-06-26 04:30 ]
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From: Shadows
| Posted: 2011-06-26 12:48
Im an ass ... anyways.. wow, thats one heck of a cliffhanger.
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NZ-juex16
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From: Southland, New Zealand
| Posted: 2011-06-27 04:42
Puched this one out a bit fast and premature but after goign months without any you deserve better.
Chapter 16
“Sir main power is out!”
“Back up?” asked Marshal Rebellion
“Coming online now sir”
“Patch me through to the chief”
“Aye sir”
“Reb what the hell just happened?
“I have no idea, the Discovery seems to be entering the station, and readings show she’s in full reverse thrust and still going forward”
“Has to be a tractor beam of some kind, make sure you keep your distance”
‘Sir, I recommend we have all the marines geared up and ready and
firearms disrupted to all crew members in case we do get caught in the
beam, you never know what may be aboard that thing”
“Hmmm yes that sounds like a good idea considering the situation, do it”
“Aye”
The screen showing the Chief Marshal closed and Rebellion swung round
and called the Marine Depot
“Colonel get your boys to load up and begin handing out weapons”
“HooRah sir”
“Comm patch me into the overhead”
“Aye patched though”
“Attention crew, this is the Captain, as I or now I have ordered the
marines to begin handing out personal firearms to all crew members in
case of a boarding or a raiding party, just remember your basic firearm
training and you should be OK…that is all”
The Light was intense, it was blinding. It was like the heavens themselves had released all there light and shone it upon the Discovery.
“Dam that’s bright” Muttered Magoo while he try’d shielding his eyes.
The Brightness dissipated as the bridge passed though the entrance, inside it was huge, dwarfing even the largest battle station fivefold.
“Sir look at this!”
The Admirals all rushed over to the Navigation computer screen. The normal English Navigation data normally displayed had disappeared and strange hieroglyphic symbols were displayed and were descending, like it was downloading or receiving instructions from something or someone.
“What the….?” Asked Tucker
“I don’t know sir they just popped onto the screen when we past though
the doors”
Shadowalker got up and looked around, the weapons officer looked back
and called out
“Sir it’s come onto my screen as well, weapons are now offline and
unloading from there standby tubes!”
“Must be a Program sent from the station so we wouldn’t go hostile” Said
Larna
“Looks like it” replied Shadowalker
“Well what now?” asked Magoo
“You go down and Start gearing up with the marines for a Raiding party
and prepare for boarders also”
“Aye”
“Tucker you go also and help the Marines coordinate and build defensive
positions on board just in case whoever lives here wants to board my
ship”
“Aye”
Both Tucker and Magoo started running down the hall, meanwhile
Shadowalker turned to Larna;
“See if you can find out what’s going on with these computers”
“I’ll do what I can”
The Ship shuddered as the Unknown program took command of the ships
engines and began docking. Then the ship stopped and a giant tube
bridge started swinging over.
The End of the Bridge stopped a little short of the main personal entrance
hatch and began extending.
“Move! Move! Move!” Yelled the Marine Captain to his men, the Marines
stopped short of the entrance and quickly put themselves into a defensive kneeling stance rifles locked and loading with the safety off, fingers on the trigger and eyes down the sights, The marine Captain Kneeled in the middle of the Marines who were in the middle of the corroder
“Hold fire!, if it starts shooting blast it to Hell and back!”
There was a hissing noise, and steam began pouring out from the sides of
the door and filling the room and quickly dissipating.
“Hold” Said the Marine Captain
The doors hissed open and the Marines held their breath.
Nothing…….
Nothing was waiting beyond the hatch but empty, one could say slightly smelly air.
“What’s going on down there?” barked Magoo on the radio
“Nothing Sir, there was nothing waiting”
“…….OK I’m coming down with more marines hold your position and we’ll
see what to do next”
“yes sir, I also ask if you could bring gear that we could use to build a
defensive position here at the entrance”
“Ok I’ll bring what we can”
The Marines began to relax and started taking off the helmets, there Captain walked up to the open door and look down the Bridge, it was made of some see though hardened martial and it went for Ages before it stopped at what appeared to be a wall.
He turned around at the sound of approaching footsteps.
“Captain!” Yelled Magoo “How does it look?”
“Come look for yourself sir”
Magoo walked over to where the captain was standing and first looked
down it like the marine had done just before.
“Man that’s a long way” he said
“I reckon at least fifty meters”
“I’d be incline to agree with you there captain”
Magoo holstered his pistol and began slowly walking out onto the Bridge.
Then something caught his eye, and he turned and looked toward what he
thought he had seen.
“Oh god”
“What Is it Sir” Said the Captain walking out and looking at what Magoo
was looking at.
He put his helmet on and cocked his Gauss Automatic coil gun rifle.
“Prepare for boarders sir?” the Captain asked sarcastically
“Yup” replied Magoo in the ‘thousand yard’ steer
The Captain turned around and started gathering his men.
Back on the Bridge, Shadowalker was leaning over his Sensor operator.
“What’s the sit-rep” he asked
“Sir it looks like a Single ICC Assault Dreadnaught and a Single Heavy
Cruiser”
“Must of followed us” he said to himself
“Can you I.D them?”
“Ah…gime a minute sir” the operator flicked a few switches and rechecked
her readings “The Dreadnaught appears to the I.S.S Norman and the
Cruiser the I.S.S Saxon, according to intelligence they’ve been taken out from the 2nd I.C.C Battle Dreadnaught fleet and been reassigned on a special mission”
“To follow us”
“By the looks of it sir, it appears they also must of gotten caught into the
tractor beam that caught us in”
“Just as I was thinking”
Shadowalker turned around
“Comm patch me through to Magoo”
“Aye”
“Magoo you…”
“Yeah I do, me and the Marines are setting up now”
“Good”
‘Beep…beep….beep’ Shadowalker turned to see Chief Marshal
Lightbreaker’s face staring straight back.
“You!”
“You!”
“You traitor who could you?”
“Long story my friend but that’s not the important at the moment”
“Yeah well we’re a bit busy at the moment ok?”
“I know we both seem to having the same problem”
“And this means?” Shadowalker Answered motioning with his right hand
for Lightbreaker to continue.
“I think seeing where we are and the predicament we’re in, I propose a
truce between our vessels and crews”
“This is ironic coming from a traitor like yourself”
“Look this pre-teen arguing is getting us nowhere, we are in the middle of
nowhere and stuck on this god-forsaken station, nobody knows where we
are and I’m also guessing you’ve got that strange language on your screens also”
“I’ll think it over” Shadowalker Motioned to the Comm officer to cut the
feed.
“What are we going to do sir?” asked his Comm officer.
“I don’t know….i mean we really got no other choice at the moment”
“And considering that there also might be a hostile force on board
somewhere I think it’s our best chance…..Sir”
“Hmmm thank you for your consolation on this………send the message that
we’ll agree, and that we’ll meet at where the glass bridges meet”
“aye sir”
“Larna come back up and take the bridge, I’m going down to meet our
new……friend”
Shadowalker went down to where Magoo and his marines were waiting.
“What’s going on? When that Dread and Cruiser Docked to more bridges
emerged from ours and connected to there’s”
“We’re on Truce, Captain bring a squad of Marines and follow me”
“Yes sir” the Captain motioned and squad of ten troops followed
Shadowalker as he walked carelessly to the Junction of the bridges”
Shadowalker soon saw the I.C.C Marines and Lightbreaker coming up their respective ships and tunnels towards where they all met.
Shadowalker arrived first at the Junction and his marines got into position.
He waited and Lightbreaker and Rebellion soon came, both sides marines hot on the triggers pointing there rifles at each other.
Lightbreaker Smiled, and stuck his hand out.
Shadowalker took his hand out grabbed Lightbreaker’s and shook his hand.
“Nice to finally meet you” said Lightbreaker
“Like to say the same but Mum taught me not to lie”
Shadowalker Turned and shook Rebellion’s hand also.
“Well that’s just unfortunate isn’t it” “Marines stand down, he is no threat”
The I.C.C Marines hesitantly lowered their rifles, there UGTO counter-parts
returned the favour.
“I think, we both should enquire as to what this place truly is don’t you?”
Shadowalker looked around and then towards the wall at the end of the
tunnel bridge.
“I’m guessing you want it to be a ‘joint’ venture”
Lightbreaker smiled
“Very well” Shadowalker motioned to his marines to follow
Both Commanders started walking towards the wall Marines in Trail. After
Fifty meters they stopped.
“What now?” asked Shadowalker
Lightbreaker looked around. “There must be a button or access console of
some sort, look around.” Both began looking around. After ten minutes of
searching……nothing.
“Would it help if I said ‘Open ses-a-me’” joked Shadowalker
Lightbreaker turned and looked at him with that ‘stop being a smart-arse’
look which we all have and seemly all known by each person even if they
did not know them.
Shadowalker and Lightbreaker stood back from the door. “Look this is
going nowhere” said Shadowalker. “Time for some action” He motion a marine over and instructed him to place explosives on the wall.
“what are you doing?”
“Blowing a hole, why what does it look like?”
“Like your blowing a hole in a wall that may lead to outer space”
“Well we’re guna find out soon”
He started walking and after he got to a safe distance with his marines he
looked at Lightbreaker “you guna stand there and get blown up and you going to come back and let me do this or what?”
Lightbreaker showed his disgust at this and began heading towards the UGTO Marines.
“Ok Captain, on the command head into the hole and secure the position,
understood?
“Yes Sir!”
“What about your guys they going in with mine or not?”
“I guess” Lightbreaker motioned his head to his Marine Major to prep to go
with the UGTO marines.
“Fire in the hole!” yelled the Demolitions marine.
And Explosion rocked the tunnel.
“GO GO GO! Yelled the UGTO Captain.
Both Factions marines moved together towards the dark hole, smoke
lingering in the air, they entered the dark room.
Inside it was Dark but when the marines Entered the entire room lit up and
exposed what was inside. The room was filled with some sort of advance
electronic equipment much similar to the Sensors boards on Human faction ships, and the railings on the walls had the same strange Alien lettering on it as what had been displaying on the ships computers.
“All Clear” Yelled the I.C.C Major
The Major walked up the UGTO Captain and they both shock hands
respectfully. After a brief chat in which they learnt they had once fought
each other in many battles they took the helmets off and walked up to something of interest. A large Glass plane overlooking what looked like darkness.
But In fact was another giant hanger. When the Two, now joined by their
respective commanders shocked them inside was a huge type of structure with two figutive statures standing next to it.
Both were not human, nor K’luth…..but something else entirely.
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From: Shadows
| Posted: 2011-06-27 13:20
must have MOAR Rawr lol!
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From: sol
| Posted: 2011-06-27 14:29
lol Nice keep it up, very interesting.
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| Posted: 2011-06-27 18:23
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From: Shadows
| Posted: 2011-06-27 23:46
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i lol'ed
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NZ-juex16
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From: Southland, New Zealand
| Posted: 2011-06-28 22:33
I';m Guessing you like?....
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Admiral C. Wilson
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Posts: 262
From: Arkansas
| Posted: 2011-06-28 22:59
Wounder if Ill ever see myself in this again. Keep up the good work!!
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Cosgrove
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Posts: 21
From: Blood Gulch
| Posted: 2011-07-14 04:48
more please XD
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From: deep jungle of vargo
| Posted: 2011-07-23 00:10
i want my new story wAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH okay im done lol keep doing a god job or else i kill u with a scout ship
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