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my intro diityo...thingy that sucks |
Catie Kat
Cadet
Joined: February 10, 2007
Posts: 1
|  Posted: 2007-03-23 20:51
its on nights like this that i wonder about strange men lurking in the windows...only on nights like this do i question my safety if i was home alone. On these nights...these ominous dark and windy nights i sit and wonder about the future then slip my thoughts back in time to days like this...days of danger and fear...
you always wonder what time has to offer...if it brings wisdom or courage...love or sanity...
we often look back in time to laugh at our foolery or mourn for our big mistakes...things that seem cloudy now are often oh so clear in the distant future when time seems to stretch and blend into one tremendous story line
i sit here and think of my could have beens and my might have beens...but most of all my should have beens...
when im sorry isnt enough and thank you means nothing...what if anything are you left with?
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Kanman
Grand Admiral
Pitch Black
Joined: August 26, 2005
Posts: 1017
From: Virginia, United States
| Posted: 2007-03-23 20:57
The content sets the stage a bit, giving me the impression that the character is sitting at home alone at night, quietly contemplating past events. It feels like a flashback is imminent and that the actual story will occur in the form of a flashback, with this character narrating along the way. There is no indication as to what the story will be about though.
Good stuff thus far. Keep typing.
[ This Message was edited by: Kanman *FC2* on 2007-03-23 20:58 ]
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