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Legatus Immolation
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|  Posted: 2006-11-09 10:48
Well as u kno there is a DS Group in Myspace and there was something about making a movie, so i thought this up on the spot would be cool tho i wld put more effort into refining this 'script' if it looked enjoyable.
here goes.
like in a dramatic scene with the 'Humans' breaking off (have like 10 icc ships friendly fire each other (not to death ofc(and have a prdamaged ship run off and other affects))) then the story goes on how those icc ships that ran away (fleet name) and how they develop their own technology and ships with a new base the recently found,
a next scene would probably be exploration ; first encounter with the kluth, 4-6 kluth ships uncloack and start duking it out with the UGTO (sorry lads UGTO will have to take the fall) UGTO is beaten by superior firepower and Kluths cloacking ability.
after the kluth massacre they start to rebuildthem selfs and learned not to venture too far, a few seconds of how well UGTO are going how well the fleet is expanding, new ships into the fleet, then a ICC scout ship comes in to proximity but a Elite assault Dread is on patrol and insta kills it with a QST. but the scout has enough time to get out a small Distress beacon, and thus ICC launch their invasion to whipe out the Rebels (UGTO), then a big Fight (no stations on UGTO just ICC for the time being) lots of dreads, cruisers etc. all duking it out both sides take heavy losses at the end only the ICC command station is left against 2 cruisers and a Transport ship, the station is heavily damaged and UGTO think the station would serve better on our side. and Thus with ICC STRIKE forces enhiliated and UGTO's 98% of the whole fleet destroyed, They Rebuild but bigger and better, the resources found on the station dramaticly improve Mining systems by adding mechanical Miners a shield in which to Mine at The inner core of a planet and increase effeicency by 86% the UGTO fleet starts to rebuild its fleet but now with their own stations.
i was thinking along the last scene
on a small patrol mission 2 UGTO frigates find a ICC planet in ruins, and a Kluuth fleet just jumping into Hyper space Heading to ICC homeworld, the 2 frigates return to base and Alert the UGTO, They send a small fleet to check out whats happening and what they saw shocked them, Kluth invading ICC to the bare bones, all planets being destroyed and ICC are being whiped out, it was time to act and act Fast, the whole UGTO armada Makes 2 WH's and jumps Either Side of the 2 battling fleets.........
Who the UGTO targets is up to you.
i thought that up on the spot but tell me what u think?
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Capt.picard
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 10:53
Good basic story line, maybe the ICC and UGTO join forces, to attack the invading K'luth, at least Temporarily...
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 10:54
You'll need all of S.W to pull of this kind of cheese...
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Legatus Immolation
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 11:01
thanks, this is what it basicly is, a BASIC story line, obviosuly if alot of people liked it and we would have a go ahead (people taking part) i would refine the script more accuratly, like HOW UGTO got the QST, and where to take specific Camera angle, yeh kno?
thanks for feedback keep it coming?
any volounteers step forward.
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 11:36
QST is just the warhead from the QSB put into a torpedo case and refined a bit. UGTO like it simple they does  .
[ This Message was edited by: BackSlash *Jack* on 2006-11-09 11:36 ]
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Legatus Immolation
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 13:14
keep em coming.
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 14:12
i would also like to see the top of a Kluth dreadnaught get hit topside with the QST like you see at the beginning of star wars 4  and have the ship adrift for a few minutes and then explode from an Antimatter containment breach lol
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 16:06
See sig.
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Legatus Immolation
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 16:08
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somebody delete his useless and pointless post. thanks.
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 16:13
I bet you didn't notice which sig he was referring to...
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Legatus Immolation
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 16:18
yes i did. the one u made for him.
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 16:26
I made that sig? I don't recall making that sig. Was that my sig coeus? I say you use the old one.
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Legatus Immolation
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 17:45
back to the subject please?
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 18:06
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somebody delete his useless and pointless post. thanks.
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Uhh...I believe he was referring to the Darkspace Twilight link in his sig, which I infer he wanted to be looked at as it is a large fan-fic and could be used for a movie...or something...defiantly not pointless...
If a movie like this ever gets started and you need someone to play a scout/frigate that gets destroyed, or just a scout/frigate give me a ring, I'd like to be a part of something like this.
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| Posted: 2006-11-09 18:29
That's what I thought he was pointing to also Binks. Glad I'm not the only one.
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