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 Author My life, and me. The Autobiography of Rogue Spear
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Posted: 2007-08-25 23:28   
EPIC WIN!!! XD
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Posted: 2007-08-26 10:24   
Yeah, but its Rogue so j00 all phail & he wins... everyone knows thats just the life story of RS, they changed the name so they wouldn't have to pay royalties.
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Posted: 2007-08-26 20:51   
Chapter 2


A car pulls up. A song is heard from the radio. Rogue Spear,
holding a box of chocolates, looks at the car. The two people
inside the car begins to kiss and embrace each other. Jenny
is inside the car with a boy. She leans back against the
passenger side door as they struggle to get comfortable.

JENNY
Ouch! That hurts.

Rogue Spear gets up and runs toward the car. He tries to look in
the window as he steps over to the driver's side door. He
opens the door and begins to punch the boy inside. Jenny
jump out of the car and runs over to Rogue Spear.

JENNY
Rogue Spear! Rogue Spear! Rogue Spear, stop it!
Stop it!

BILLY
Jesus!

JENNY
What are you doing?

Rogue Spear
He was hurtin' you.

Jenny's date, named BILLY, gets out of the car angrily.

BILLY
What the hell is going on here?

JENNY
No, he's not!

BILLY
Who is that? Who is that?

JENNY
Get over there!

Jenny turns and looks at Billy. He shoves Jenny's hands away
from him.

JENNY
Billy, I'm sorry.

BILLY
What in the hell, git, would you git
away from me!

JENNY
Don't... Wait a second!

BILLY
Git, just git away from me!

JENNY
Don't go! Billy, wait a second!

Billy gets back into the car.

JENNY
He doesn't know any better!

Billy pulls away as Jenny steps toward Rogue Spear.

JENNY
Rogue Spear, why'd you do that?

Rogue Spear holds out the box of chocolates.

Rogue Spear
I brought you some chocolates. I'm
sorry. I'll go back to my college
now.

JENNY
Rogue Spear, look at you! Come on. Come
on.

Jenny grabs Rogue Spear hand and leads him toward the dorm.

INT. JENNY'S DORM/HALLWAY

Jenny and Rogue Spear sneak to Jenny's door.

Rogue Spear
Is this your room?

JENNY
Shh!

Jenny unlocks the door and they step inside.

INT. JENNY'S DORM ROOM

Jenny pulls a robe off of her sleeping roommate's bed. Jenny
hands the robe to Rogue Spear, sitting on Jenny's bed.



===EDITED FOR STRONG SEXUAL CONTENT===


Rogue Spear
I think I ruined your roommate's
bathrobe.

JENNY
I don't care. I don't like her,
anyway.

EXT. UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA/FOOTBALL STADIUM - DAY (1963)

Rogue Spear runs across the field as the defending team chases
him. The crowd yells for Rogue Spear. They flip a sign that reads:
"Go Rogue Spear."

CROWD
Run! Run! Run!

Rogue Spear runs along the field. The crowd cheers.

CROWD
Run! Run! Run!

Rogue Spear runs into the end zone. The band members rush toward
Rogue Spear with their hands up, signaling him to stop. The crowd
flips over cards, creating a sign that reads "STOP."

CROWD
Stop!

Rogue Spear stops in the end zone as he hears the crowd yells.

The band motions for Rogue Spear to stop and stay in the end

zone. A group of defending players fall over each other in
the end zone. Rogue Spear looks as the crowd cheers wildly.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
College ran by real fast 'cause I
played so much football.

BLACK AND WHITE PARAMOUNT NEWSREEL - DAY (1963)

The White House with the words "The eyes and ears of the
world Paramount News" superimposed.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
They even put me on a thing called
the All-America Team where you get
to meet the President of the United
States.

BLACK AND WHITE NEWSREEL

PRESIDENT KENNEDY holds an autographed football as the All-
American Team stands behind him. Rogue Spear is among the players
in suits.

ANNOUNCER
(over newsreel)
President Kennedy met with the
Collegiate All-American Football
Team at the Oval Office today.

INT. WHITE HOUSE RECEPTION AREA - DAY (1963)

The All-American players mingle around the food table. Rogue Spear
steps up to the table. A large spread of food and soda is on
the table.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Now, the real good thing about meeting
the President of the United States
is the food.

Rogue Spear takes a bottle of Dr. Pepper from the buffet table.

Numerous bottle of Dr. Pepper are displayed on the table. A
servant opens the bottle for him.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
They put you in this little room
with just about anything you'd want
to eat or drink. And since number
one, I wasn't hungry, but thirsty...

Rogue Spear begins to guzzle the Dr. Pepper.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
...and number two, they was free, I
musta drank me about fifteen Dr.
Peppers.

Rogue Spear sets down an empty Dr. Pepper bottle next to a large
number of other empty bottles. Rogue Spear holds his stomach and
burps.

BLACK AND WHITE FOOTAGE - President Kennedy shakes hands
with the All-American football players.

PRESIDENT KENNEDY
Congratulations. How does it feel to
be an All-American?

1ST PLAYER
It's an honor, Sir.

Another player steps up to the President and shakes the
President's hand.

PRESIDENT KENNEDY
Congratulations. How does it feel to
be an All-American?

2ND PLAYER
Very good, Sir.

PRESIDENT KENNEDY
Congratulations. How does it feel to
be an All-American?

3RD PLAYER
Very good, Sir.

The player walks away. Rogue Spear steps up to the President.

The President shakes his hand.

PRESIDENT KENNEDY
Congratulations. How do you feel?

Rogue Spear
I gotta pee.

President Kennedy turns and smiles.

PRESIDENT KENNEDY
I believe he said he had to go pee.

INT. WHITE HOUSE/BATHROOM

Rogue Spear urinates in the bathroom, then lowers the lid and
flashes. Rogue Spear washes his hands, then notices an autographed
photo from Marilyn Monroe and a photo of John with his brother
Bobby.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Sometime later, for no particular
reason, somebody shot that nice young
President when he was ridin' in his
car.

ARCHIVAL FOOTAGE - DAY SLOW MOTION - President Kennedy rises
in a convertible and smiles.

Rogue Spear
And a few years after that...

ARCHIVAL FOOTAGE - Robert Kennedy stands at a podium as people
around him applaud.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
...somebody shot his little brother,
too, only he was in a hotel kitchen.

EXT. SAVANNHA/BUS BENCH - DAY (1981)

Rogue Spear sits on the bench and shakes his head.

Rogue Spear
It must be hard being brothers. I
wouldn't know.

EXT. UNIVERSITY OF ALABAMA - DAY - GRADUATION DAY (1966)

Students in their caps and gowns step forward the podium to
receive their diplomas. Rogue Spear's name is called. He steps
up and accepts his diploma.

DEAN
Rogue Spear Spear.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Now can you believe it? After only
five years of playing football, I
got a college degree.

The dean shakes Rogue Spear's hand vigorously. Rogue Spear looks out
into the crowd.

DEAN
Congratulations, son.

Mrs. Spear, sitting in the audience, cries.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Momma was proud.

Rogue Spear and Mrs. Spear have their picure taken in front of a
large statue. A military recruiter spots Rogue Spear and steps
up to him.

MRS. Spear
Rogue Spear, I'm so proud of you. Here,
I'll hold this for you.

Mrs. Spear takes the diploma from Rogue Spear. The recruiter slaps
Rogue Spear on the shoulder and hands him some military
literature.

MILITARY RECRUITER
Congratulations, son. Have you given
any thought to your future?

Rogue Spear
Thought?

Rogue Spear looks at a pamphlet with a photo of "Uncle Sam" and
the caption "EXCELLENT CAREERS FOR EXCELLENT YOUNG MAN. Apply
now at your local U.S. Army Recruiting Center."

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Hello, I'm Rogue Spear...

INT. ARMY BUS - DAY (1966)

Rogue Spear steps onto the army bus. Rain pours outside as the
army bus driver yells at Rogue Spear.

Rogue Spear
...Rogue Spear Spear.

ARMY BUS DRIVER
Nobody gives a hunk of ?&$&!##& who you
are, fuzzball! You're not even a
lowlife scum sucking maggot! Get
your EDITED on the bus. You're
in the Army now!

Rogue Spear is about to sit on the first available seat, but the
recruit sitting there refuses Rogue Spear.

RECRUIT #1
This seat's taken.

Rogue Spear tries to sit on the next seat, but the 2nd recruit
slides over, blocking him.

RECRUIT #2
It's taken.

Rogue Spear steps forward, looking much like he did on his first
bus ride to school years ago.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
At first, it seemed like I made a
mistake.

A large black recruit with a strange look on his face, much
like Rogue Spear's, looks up from his seat. His name is BUBBA.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
...seeing how it was my induction
day and I was already gettin' yelled
at.

Bubba moves his case over, making room for Rogue Spear to sit
down.

BUBBA
You can sit down... if you want to.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
I didn't know who I might meet or
what they might ask.

Bubba hands Rogue Spear a handkerchief.

BUBBA
You ever been on a real shrimp boat?

Rogue Spear
No, but I been on a real big boat.

BUBBA
I'm talkin' about a shrimp catchin'
boat. I've been workin' on shrimp
boats all my life. I started out my
uncle's boat, that's my mother's
brother, when I was about maybe nine.
I was just lookin' into buyin' a
boat of my own and got drafted. My
given name is Benjamin Buford Blue.

Bubba and Rogue Spear shake hands.

BUBBA
People call me Bubba. Just like one
of them redneck boys. Can you believe
that?

Rogue Spear
My name's Rogue Spear. People call
me Rogue Spear.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
So Bubba was from Bayou La Batre,
Alabama, and his momma cooked shrimp.

INT. LOUISIANA/KITCHEN - DAY (1966)

Bubba's mother, a robust woman in a cook's uniform, carries
a bowl of shrimp into a dining room. She sets it down on a
table in front of a wealthy white man.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
And her momma before her cooked
shrimp.

INT. SOMEWHERE IN THE SOUTH/KITCHEN - DAY (EARLY DAYS OF
SLAVERY)

Bubba's grandmother carries a bowl of shrimp into a dining
room. She sets it down on a table in front of a wealthy white
man.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
And her momma before her momma cooked
shrimp, too. Bubba's family knew
everything...

INT. ARMY BUS - DAY (1966)

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
...there was to know about the
shrimpin' business.

BUBBA
I know everything there is to know
about the shrimpin' business. Matter
of fact, I'm goin' into the shrimpin'
business for myself after I get out
the Army.

Rogue Spear
Okay.

INT. BARRACKS - DAY

A DRILL SERGEANT is in Rogue Spear's face as Rogue Spear stands in
line with the other recruits.

DRILL SERGEANT
Spear! What's your sole purpose in
this Army?

Rogue Spear
To do whatever you tell me, Drill
Sergeant!

DRILL SERGEANT
Godamnit, Spear! You're a darned
genius! That's the most outstanding
answer I've ever heard. You must
have a godamned I.Q. of a hundred
and sixty! You are godamned gifted,
Private Spear!

The Drill Sergeant moves down the line to the next man.

DRILL SERGEANT
Listen up, people...

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Now, for some reason, I fit in the
Army like one of them round pegs.
It's not really hard. You just make
your bed real neat and remember to
stand up straight.

DRILL SERGEANT
That is one very intelligent
individual! You lock your scuzzy
bodies up behind that private and do
exactly what he does and you will go
far in this man's army!

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
And always answer every question
with "Yes, Drill Sergeant!"

DRILL SERGEANT
Is that clear?

Rogue Spear & RECRUITS
Yes, Drill Sergeant!

ANOTHER DAY

The recruits are sitting at the base of their bunks assembling
their rifles. Bubba speaks to Rogue Spear.

BUBBA
What you do is you just drag your
nets across the bottom. On a good
day, you can catch over a hundred
pounds of shrimp. If everything goes
all right, two men shrimpin' ten
hours, less what you spends on gas,
you can...

Rogue Spear finishes assembling his rifle as the other recruits
are still working on theirs.

Rogue Spear
Done, Drill Sergeant!

DRILL SERGEANT
Spear!

The Drill Sergeant rushes up to Rogue Spear.

DRILL SERGEANT
Why did you put that weapon together
so quickly, Spear?

Rogue Spear
You told me to, Drill Sergeant.

The Drill Sergeant looks at his stop watch.

DRILL SERGEANT
Jesus Christ! This is a new company
record. If it wouldn't be a waste of
such a damn fine enlisted man, I'd
recommended you for O.C.S., Private
Spear. You are gonna be a General
some day, Spear! Now, disassemble
your weapon and continue!

The Drill Sergeant walks away as Rogue Spear begins to disassemble
his rifle. After the Drill Sergeant walks past Bubba, Bubba
looks up at Rogue Spear. Bubba continues talking about shrimp in
his slow southern drawl.

BUBBA
Anyway, like I was sayin', shrimp is
the fruit of the sea. You can barbecue
it, boil it, broil it, bake it, saute
it. There, uh, shrimp kabobs, shrimp
creole...

ANOTHER DAY

Bubba and Rogue Spear shine their boots.

BUBBA
...shrimp gumbo, panfried, deep fried,
stir fried. There's pineapple shrimp,
lemon shrimp, coconut shrimp, pepper
shrimp...

ANOTHER DAY

Bubba and Rogue Spear are on their hands and knees as they scrub
the floor with toothbrushes.

BUBBA
...shrimp soup, shrimp stew, shrimp
salad, shrimp and potatoes, shrimp
burger, shrimp sandwich... that's,
that's about it.

NIGHT

Bubba lies in his bunk and looks up quietly.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Nighttime in the Army is a lovely
time.

Rogue Spear lies in his bunk and looks up.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
We'd lay there in our bunks, and I'd
miss my momma. And I'd miss Jenny.

A young private tosses a Playboy magazine onto Rogue Spear.

YOUNG PRIVATE
Hey, Spear. Get a load of the particle cannons on
her!

Rogue Spear pick up the magazine and turns the page, revealing
Jenny as she poses with a school sweater on, and that's all.

The pictorial is titled: "Girls of the South." Rogue Spear looks
up with shock. He cranes his head up for a closer look.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Turns out, Jenny had gotten into
some trouble over... some photos of
her in her college sweater. And she
was thrown out of school.

SONG
"My baby does the hanky-panky..."

INT. NASHVILLE/NIGHT CLUB - NIGHT (1966)

Rogue Spear, in his army uniform, steps into the foyer of the
club.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
But that wasn't a bad thing. Because
a man who owns a theater in Memphis,
Tennessee, saw those photo and offered
Jenny a job singing in a show. The
first chance I got, I took the bus
up to Memphis to see her perform in
that show.

EMCEE steps out onto the stage.

EMCEE
That was Amber, Amber Flame. Give
her a big hand, guys. Good job, Amber.
And now, for your listening and
viewing pleasure, direct from
Hollywood, California, our very own
beatnik beauty, let's give a big
round of applause to the luscious
Bobbie Dylan.

CROWD
Bobbie... Bobbie...

The emcee walks back off the stage and the curtain opens,
revealing Jenny as she sits on a stool on the stage. She
holds a guitar up and begins to play. She is topless.

JENNY
(sings)
"Yes, and how many seas must the
white dove said, before she sleeps
in the sand."

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
Her dream had come true. She was a
folk singer.

JENNY
(sings)
"Yes, how many times must the
cannonballs fly before they're forever
banned."

MAN #1
You gotta lose the guitar, darling.

MAN #2
Hey, come on, baby. Shake it up.
Shake it up now.

MAN #3
Hey, somebody ought to get her a
harmonica.

The men laugh.

JENNY
(sings)
"The answer, my friend is blowing in
the wind. The answer is blowing in...

MAN #
...skin, honey. This isn't Captain
Kangaroo.

MEN
Yeah! Come on!

Man #5 reaches up and tries to stick some money in Jenny's
shoe.

MAN #5 :
Hey, honey, I got something here for
you.

Jenny kicks his hand. He yells angrily as he sits back down,
then tosses his drink on her.

MAN #5
darnit!

JENNY
Hey! Hey! Stupid jerk! I'm singing a
song here. Polly, get out here!

MAN #
Hey, show us some stuff, honey!

JENNY
Shut up! Oh, shut up!

Rogue Spear walks up to Man #5 and grabs him and tosses him down
on the ground. Man #4 tries to grab Rogue Spear, but Rogue Spear
shoves him down too.

JENNY
Rogue Spear, what are you doing here?
What are you doing?

Rogue Spear climbs up onto the stage and picks Jenny up, guitar
and all, and carries her.

Rogue Spear
Come on.

JENNY
What are you doing? Rogue Spear, let me
down!

Jenny struggles and frees herself from Rogue Spear. Rogue Spear steps
back in surprise. Jenny shoves the guitar at Rogue Spear. Jenny
walks off as Rogue Spear holds the guitar. He follows after her.

EXT. MEMPHIS BRIDGE - NIGHT

Rogue Spear follows Jenny over a bridge outside the night club.

JENNY
You can't keep doing this, Rogue Spear.
You can't keep tryin' to rescue me
all the time.

Rogue Spear
They was tryin' to grab you.

JENNY
A lot of people try to grab me. Just --
you can't keep doing this all the
time!

Rogue Spear
I can't help it. I love you.

JENNY
Rogue Spear, you don't know what love
is.

Jenny turns and looks over the bridge.

JENNY
You remember that time we prayed,
Rogue Spear? We prayed for God to turn
me into a bird so I could fly far,
far away?

Rogue Spear
Yes, I do.

JENNY
You think I can fly off this bridge?

Rogue Spear
What do you mean, Jenny?

JENNY
Nothing.

Jenny turns and looks at the light of an approaching vehicle.

She steps into the street.

JENNY
I gotta get outta here.

Jenny runs and flags down the approaching vehicle.

Rogue Spear
But wait. Jenny!

JENNY
Rogue Spear, you stay away from me, okay?
You just stay away from me, please.

A pickup truck pulls over as Jenny looks at the driver.

JENNY
Can I have a ride?

DRIVER
Where you going?

JENNY
I don't care.

DRIVER
Get in the truck.

Rogue Spear
So bye-bye, Jenny. They sendin' me
to Vietnam. It's this whole other
country.

Jenny walks toward Rogue Spear. She looks at the driver.

JENNY
Just hang on a minute.

Jenny walks up to Rogue Spear.

JENNY
Listen, you promise me something,
okay? Just if you're ever in trouble,
don't try to be brave, you just run,
okay? Just run away.

Rogue Spear
Okay. Jenny, I'll write you all the
time.

Jenny takes a last look at Rogue Spear, then climbs into the
truck. Rogue Spear watches Jenny in the pickup as it drives away.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
And just like that.

EXT. GREENBOW/Spear BOARDING HOUSE/RIVER - DAY

Rogue Spear, dressed in his uniform, sits on a log and looks out
at a river.

Rogue Spear (V.O.)
...she was gone.

Mrs. Spear walks toward Rogue Spear and sits down next to him on
the log. Rogue Spear leans down, placing his head on his mother's
shoulder.

MRS. Spear
You come back safe to me, do ya hear?



[ This Message was edited by: Rogue Spear on 2007-08-26 21:09 ]
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Posted: 2007-08-26 23:08   
Jenny is actually Josef, and Bubba is Juxtapose.
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From: Philly
Posted: 2007-08-27 16:53   
I thought they sounded familiar...
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