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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2005-10-22 11:50  
You better, you're still a key part of it =P I think... rofl
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Lux (Polaris) Fleet Admiral Raven Warriors
Joined: April 20, 2004 Posts: 835 From: Asgard
| Posted: 2005-10-22 17:23  
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On 2005-10-20 22:26, Rocko Willis wrote:
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It lowered its blade swiftly, and Coeus' future fell to the ground in a heap, motionless.
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OMG! Something cut off Coeus's Weiner!!!
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Lol.
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2005-10-22 17:46  
Currently going through and fixing little plotholes and flubs - please post them instead of sending me in chat 'cause I get wayyyy too many friend messages to sift through 'em =P
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Jaydawg Vice Admiral
Joined: October 11, 2003 Posts: 150 From: vermilion AB
| Posted: 2005-10-23 02:40  
Thank you so much for including me in your epic story Coeus!
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2005-10-23 15:06  
My pleasure
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2005-10-25 17:16  
BUMP to the top of the topics list!
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2006-02-12 19:53  
Hey, if Rocko can do it, then so can I! *bump*
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2006-03-17 18:02  
For those of you who are fans of the MS Word Doc version, I have finally touched it up, fixed all those glaring grammatical and spelling mistakes, and have actually gone to kinkos & printed up two complete copies of the story, 2 sided printing. I will be making a front & back cover and will gladly snailmail a copy to anyone who asks, no shipping charges or nothing!
To anyone who just wants to download it, the address is and always has been http://onesoul.dragonsbreath.tv/ds/users/twilight.doc
Enjoy!
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2006-05-17 19:37  
Bump because I feel like it
Working on a complete rewrite & update - probably double the size of the story itself... which is a good thing!
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Linna Yamazaka {Vice Admiral} Vice Admiral Raven Warriors
Joined: May 03, 2003 Posts: 415 From: killer
| Posted: 2006-05-18 23:31  
I look forward to reading this, I hope my charactor is in the storyline more. I liked the small part I was in And the Jumping INTO the wormhole, That is something i do and even do today with Jumping into warpgates, and wormholes. I'm too busy to read it at once and I'm going to download and read it later.
Jessie "Lenna Yamazaka"
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Jaydawg Vice Admiral
Joined: October 11, 2003 Posts: 150 From: vermilion AB
| Posted: 2006-05-19 00:58  
I want a bigger part! I WANNA KILL SOMETHING....something grand...something epic.....omg.....my mouth is watering...
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2006-05-19 07:49  
Your not my real mom, I don't have to listen to you! heh....
Might be a good excuse to touch up all those storylines that people were unsatisfied with... but might not be. No promises.
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-RevenG-
Raven Warriors
Joined: March 03, 2004 Posts: 2673
| Posted: 2006-05-19 11:50  
Cough, Coeus, where is my part? I thought we agreed I would be the guy in a tent in space...
[ This Message was edited by: -RevenG- +1 on 2006-05-19 12:32 ]
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Coeus {NCX-Charger} Admiral, I can't read, Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: February 16, 2004 Posts: 3635 From: South Philly
| Posted: 2006-05-25 19:28  
I'll make sure you're a redshirt or something in the next story...
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Coeus Grand Admiral Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: March 22, 2006 Posts: 2815 From: Philly
| Posted: 2006-10-27 22:02  
Bump!
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