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nicklane1
2nd Rear Admiral
Joined: October 03, 2009
Posts: 112
From: Eating your cheese behind you.
|  Posted: 2010-07-19 18:12
"This is the Kluth Mandible Star Raptor, We are in position with the Ultimate worker, Nest, the 6 Claws, the Advanced Carrier and the 2 bomber Clavates." "Ok you have been cleared to jump." "OK engage hyperdrive!" "SIR we have arrived" "Order the transport to cloak, the bombers to engage their bombing runs, the Nest to support the fleet from long range, the Ultimate Worker to supply the bombers and the Claws to form on us and kill the UGTO!!!!"
The UGTO had 3 Battle Dreadnaughts and 4 Torp cruisers, the odds were stacked agianst the desprate Kluth.
"Disruptors to 100% power PSI cannons to 50% and engines at 0% power, we need to hold the torp cruisers in place while the rest of the fleet destroys the Dreadnaughts." Our torpedos tore through the hull of the first one, forcing it to retreat before it got off a alpha. The other three fire off their torpedos, 2 of the alphas crush our armor while we managed to avoid the third. After this we lined up the three cruisers and fire on the one in back of the line. This destroyed 1 and ripped off the armor on another damaging its weapons, thus forcing it to retreat. The forth fires and barely misses our hull, a laser still grazed our hull almost destorying us and sending all weapons offline. "WE CANT HOLD OUT ANY LONGER!!!!! Jump 3 thousand GU from the fight, ASAP!." While we were fighting the Claws swarmed one of the Battle dreadnaughts and fire all torpedos obliterating it, as this happened the Nest fired beams into the hull of a Dreanaught who jumped them, failing to destroy it, while all the cannons on the Dreadnaught destroyed half the weapons and highly weakened the hull of the Nest, The final dreadnaught had its cannons pick targets weakening two claws and destroying two. The remaining claws fired onto the dreadnaught barely destroying it, unfortuneatly it killed 2 more claws before it went down. The remaining Dreadnaught fires its beams and cannons destroying the Nest, the crew managed to eject and board the damaged Star Raptor. Just then the remaining 2 claws down the highly damaged dreadnaught, Unfortunately the remaining Torpedo Cruiser arrives and fires its beams destroying one of the last claws, Fate would have it that the bombers were finished and assisted the Claw, the final torpedo cruiser when down in a hail of beams and torpedos. The Star raptor returns and begins repairing while the advanced carrier lands 10 Drone Bezerkers on the planet and it is claimed in the name of GLOURIS KLUTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Note this is my first fan fiction and something i did because i was bored, just something to liven up the fourms.  This will be my only one unless you guys want more.
[ This Message was edited by: nicklane1 on 2010-07-21 16:19 ]
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Nurfed
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Joined: May 09, 2010
Posts: 5
From: Canada
| Posted: 2010-07-19 18:31
i cant be its good, but it'd probably be better with paragraphs.
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nicklane1
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Joined: October 03, 2009
Posts: 112
From: Eating your cheese behind you.
| Posted: 2010-07-19 19:35
Sorry its not that good, i did it in 5 min because i had nothing to do.
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Leonide
Grand Admiral
Templar Knights
Joined: October 01, 2005
Posts: 1553
From: Newport News, Virginia
| Posted: 2010-07-19 19:44
don't quit your day job.
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Shigernafy
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Joined: May 29, 2001
Posts: 5726
From: The Land of Taxation without Representation
| Posted: 2010-07-19 20:08
With a title like that, how can you go wrong?
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Doran
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Galactic Navy
Joined: March 29, 2003
Posts: 4032
From: The Gideon Unit
| Posted: 2010-07-19 21:09
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On 2008-04-04 16:48, Fattierob wrote:
Darkspace: Repercussions of Evil
Enterprise waited. The stars above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were ICC in the system. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to admial Halsey were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
Enterprise was a space ship captain for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY REBELS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space base of the UGTO he knew there were rebels.
"This is Halsey" the radio crackered. "You must fight the rebels!"
So Enterprise gotted his picket destroyer and jumped to a system.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the ICC ships.
"I will shoot at him" said the escort destroy and he fired the particle cannon. Enterprise spacebared at him and tried to blew him up. But then the engines stopped and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the ICC!" he shouted
The radio said "No, Enterprise. You are the ICC."
And then Enterprise was a MiRVer.
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Vivec
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Joined: June 11, 2010
Posts: 10
From: Andromeda
| Posted: 2010-07-20 00:40
I'll give you props. Any win for the K'luth is worth another visit.  Plus, we do have some monster fights close to Bean Station.
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Kenny_Naboo
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Pitch Black
Joined: January 11, 2010
Posts: 3823
From: LobsterTown
| Posted: 2010-07-20 01:15
You shoulda started the story with:
'It was a dark and stormy night.....'
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nicklane1
2nd Rear Admiral
Joined: October 03, 2009
Posts: 112
From: Eating your cheese behind you.
| Posted: 2010-07-20 06:32
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On 2010-07-20 01:15, Kenny_Naboo wrote:
You shoulda started the story with:
'It was a dark and stormy night.....'
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I'ts always night in space
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Fatal Command (CO)
Chief Marshal
Fatal Squadron
Joined: November 27, 2002
Posts: 1159
From: Back in Texas and noticing some ppl are like canoes.....they need to be paddled.
| Posted: 2010-07-20 07:20
or once upon a midnight dreary......
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The_Enforcer (The Vindicator)
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Joined: March 05, 2010
Posts: 163
From: another dimension
| Posted: 2010-07-20 10:55
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On 2010-07-20 07:20, Fatal Command (CO) wrote:
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your just going with the flow arent you?
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PhiliChez
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Joined: April 12, 2010
Posts: 28
| Posted: 2010-07-21 12:01
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On 2010-07-19 21:09, Doran wrote:
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On 2008-04-04 16:48, Fattierob wrote:
Darkspace: Repercussions of Evil
Enterprise waited. The stars above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were ICC in the system. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to admial Halsey were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
Enterprise was a space ship captain for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY REBELS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space base of the UGTO he knew there were rebels.
"This is Halsey" the radio crackered. "You must fight the rebels!"
So Enterprise gotted his picket destroyer and jumped to a system.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the ICC ships.
"I will shoot at him" said the escort destroy and he fired the particle cannon. Enterprise spacebared at him and tried to blew him up. But then the engines stopped and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the ICC!" he shouted
The radio said "No, Enterprise. You are the ICC."
And then Enterprise was a MiRVer.
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imma sorry but ur grammer is horrid. oldered? go back to school, if u are still in school, they pat attention!
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Jar Jar Binks
Grand Admiral
Joined: December 25, 2001
Posts: 556
| Posted: 2010-07-21 14:29
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On 2010-07-21 12:01, PhiliChez wrote:
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On 2010-07-19 21:09, Doran wrote:
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On 2008-04-04 16:48, Fattierob wrote:
Darkspace: Repercussions of Evil
Enterprise waited. The stars above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were ICC in the system. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to admial Halsey were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
Enterprise was a space ship captain for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY REBELS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space base of the UGTO he knew there were rebels.
"This is Halsey" the radio crackered. "You must fight the rebels!"
So Enterprise gotted his picket destroyer and jumped to a system.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the ICC ships.
"I will shoot at him" said the escort destroy and he fired the particle cannon. Enterprise spacebared at him and tried to blew him up. But then the engines stopped and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the ICC!" he shouted
The radio said "No, Enterprise. You are the ICC."
And then Enterprise was a MiRVer.
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imma sorry but ur grammer is horrid. oldered? go back to school, if u are still in school, they pat attention!
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imma sorry? u? ur? they pat attention?
want to clarify those for me?
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nicklane1
2nd Rear Admiral
Joined: October 03, 2009
Posts: 112
From: Eating your cheese behind you.
| Posted: 2010-07-21 16:21
Guys... Dont argue over grammer, just read the story and post about it.
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Coeus
Grand Admiral
Sundered Weimeriners
Joined: March 22, 2006
Posts: 2815
From: Philly
| Posted: 2010-07-21 21:20
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On 2010-07-21 12:01, PhiliChez wrote:
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On 2010-07-19 21:09, Doran wrote:
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On 2008-04-04 16:48, Fattierob wrote:
Darkspace: Repercussions of Evil
Enterprise waited. The stars above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were ICC in the system. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to admial Halsey were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
Enterprise was a space ship captain for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY REBELS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space base of the UGTO he knew there were rebels.
"This is Halsey" the radio crackered. "You must fight the rebels!"
So Enterprise gotted his picket destroyer and jumped to a system.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the ICC ships.
"I will shoot at him" said the escort destroy and he fired the particle cannon. Enterprise spacebared at him and tried to blew him up. But then the engines stopped and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the ICC!" he shouted
The radio said "No, Enterprise. You are the ICC."
And then Enterprise was a MiRVer.
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imma sorry but ur grammer is horrid. oldered? go back to school, if u are still in school, they pat attention!
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ROFL, successful bait story is successful....
Someone go find Rob & tell him he got another one
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