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DragonSlayer*Sanctuary* Grand Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: March 25, 2005 Posts: 233 From: dragonslayer83
| Posted: 2009-01-09 03:29  
The UGTO Fleet Command requested Grand Admiral DragonSlayer to come in from retirement to command a new prototype research station and take it into uncharted system. We join him in the Chief Marshal's office where his mission will be explained....
Chief Marshal Rafell: Thank you for comming in on such short notice
DragonSlayer. I know you are retired, but you the only one I can trust with a mission like this.
DragonSlayer: Sir Chief Marshal, might I ask this mission is that is so important?
Rafell: Well son, you see, we opened a trade route threw a new system called Epsilon Ind. As you know we sent out scouts and made sure that there was safe passage threw and they came back negative.
DragonSlayer: So why do you need me to take a research station out there if it is all clear?
Rafell: I am getting to that. You see, for months everything went well. Transports was getting through the system with no troubles or any kind of attacks. Well just last week we got a really distorted message from transport omega1.225. The message was too garbaled to make out but the transport never turned in at its destination.
DragonSlayer: Good Lord, doesn't transport omega carry....
Refell: Yes it does! I sent 3 crusiers to investigate what happend. Fleet Admiral Riley was in the command of the search party on board the lead cruiser The Justice. I have yet not heard anything from them.
DragonSlayer: So I take that all transports have been rerouted until further notice?
Rafell: Of course, all routes threw the Epsilon Ind have been shut down until we can find what has happened to the omega cargo and FA Riley.
DragonSlayer: Sir, when can I leave?
Rafell: The station Sanctuary will be ready for Worm hole launch in two days. Which gives you two days to pick your officers. Before your launch I will brief you and your officers on your mission.
DragonSlayer:Yes sir*Salutes*
Rafell:*Salutes*
To be continued....
Dragonslayer: Wait a hot second here, where am I going to find some officers?
Narrator: If you would like to be within the story please post so.
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-Shadowalker-™ Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: September 23, 2007 Posts: 709 From: Shadows
| Posted: 2009-01-09 17:44  
sounds cool, i wouldnt mind me being in it.
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FlyD4wn Fleet Admiral
Joined: October 19, 2004 Posts: 138 From: Netherlands
| Posted: 2009-01-09 17:47  
pick me pick me =)
Looking forward to read more, i like DS storys!
-Fly
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Leonide Grand Admiral Templar Knights
Joined: October 01, 2005 Posts: 1553 From: Newport News, Virginia
| Posted: 2009-01-09 18:18  
<------------- tactical.
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Bryghtblade Vice Admiral
Joined: January 29, 2007 Posts: 22
| Posted: 2009-01-09 19:56  
good beginning....look forward to next instalment!......but just so you know the word your looking for is through.....not threw,that is in " he threw the ball to the dog"
lol
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Sinister Strawberry Fleet Admiral
Joined: October 26, 2007 Posts: 45 From: My Computer.
| Posted: 2009-01-10 01:25  
Sounds pretty cool.
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DragonSlayer*Sanctuary* Grand Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: March 25, 2005 Posts: 233 From: dragonslayer83
| Posted: 2009-01-11 13:55  
Change of plan, DSF will be putting this story on the big screen. Filming already in progress. Will Provide a trailer soon as possble.
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SoL Badguy *Monster Energy* Grand Admiral
Joined: November 03, 2007 Posts: 42 From: Romania, Craiova
| Posted: 2009-01-11 13:59  
Lol. Go get'em D ^^
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Sixkiller Marshal Courageous Elite Commandos
Joined: May 11, 2005 Posts: 1786 From: Netherlands
| Posted: 2009-01-11 14:59  
DSF?
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DragonSlayer*Sanctuary* Grand Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: March 25, 2005 Posts: 233 From: dragonslayer83
| Posted: 2009-01-11 15:02  
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On 2009-01-11 14:59, Sixkiller wrote:
DSF?
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DarkSpace Films
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DragonSlayer*Sanctuary* Grand Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: March 25, 2005 Posts: 233 From: dragonslayer83
| Posted: 2009-01-11 15:09  
Movie Trailer here now! Enjoy
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Sinister Strawberry Fleet Admiral
Joined: October 26, 2007 Posts: 45 From: My Computer.
| Posted: 2009-01-12 14:27  
looking forward to it.
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Lux (Polaris) Fleet Admiral Raven Warriors
Joined: April 20, 2004 Posts: 835 From: Asgard
| Posted: 2009-01-12 14:39  
I keep reading 'Rafell' as 'Drafell'...
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Leonide Grand Admiral Templar Knights
Joined: October 01, 2005 Posts: 1553 From: Newport News, Virginia
| Posted: 2009-01-12 15:13  
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On 2009-01-12 14:39, Polaris {ISC} wrote:
I keep reading 'Rafell' as 'Drafell'...
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i wonder why... <.<
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DragonSlayer*Sanctuary* Grand Admiral Galactic Navy
Joined: March 25, 2005 Posts: 233 From: dragonslayer83
| Posted: 2009-01-12 15:47  
Part one is done, you have already read the most part. I changed a few errors but I just found a missed one. Here are diffrent links u can try to watch. Comments are welcome.
Also i know it seemed a bit fast for the subs. bare with me. im using a new program.
http://www.megavideo.com/?v=WMPLE5YO
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OazPXVvMDjk
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=50223712
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